on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar
13 Jan 2003, 1:58 PM
very deep and oddly like lessons, kinda mad, but good thoguh until is still my favourite ill give you 7
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
27 Jan 2003, 11:32 AM
fool
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 10:38 AM
YOU TRY TO HARD, your poems are full of intricacys they dont need, they are frankly souless as well there is no fire no passion. basically that describes all your poems, so thats 10 for effort, 0 for soul and 4 for over all so a total of 3 out of 10
on Our Sweet Lady Lispalot by lunar
5 Apr 2003, 10:42 AM
isnt this kinda like that thing we did in year 5 or 6? about the woman and the mirror and lancealot and all? Oh well this was quite comical and all but nto your best, the best ones where your tortured love poems, id sa resently you have gone down hill, but thats the way life goes
FIRSTLY the mudvanye fellow is a stalker, SECONDLY the poem isnt as good as some of your others and THIRD you people talk of morality but its only mere opinion, there is no galatic right or wrong justs whats funny, and i think its funny the war with iraq. After all the amount of international laws broken by the maericans will land them in shit, firstly they themselfves have peraded iraq POW's on TV breaking the geneva convention, the US government has sactioned use of cheamical weapons on iraqi soliders (in contrevention of the UN cheamical weapons treaties) and finally the invaded a country with the aim of reshime change (TWICE!!) and that goes against international law, so its gonna be hilarious when they have to go to court of this (BUSH IS A WAR CRIMINAL!!!)
on Spring Rolls by Ranger
27 Jan 2003, 11:27 AM
average, sorry i just dont feel anytihng from this
on The poemranker desk by lunar
13 Jan 2003, 1:57 PM
i like it cause its different, its really interesting though, the way that it has the random nature, i like that about it, a bit too conceptual for me
on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
13 Jan 2003, 2:21 PM
ok this one does deserve a 10, i like it but i dont know why!
on Xmas gifts list by lunar
12 Jan 2003, 2:39 PM
beautiful
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
2 Feb 2003, 3:09 PM
talk more of love i like that better. although an 8 for this