| Re: The ballad of woosie by rosiebailey |
15-Dec-03/12:13 PM |
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| Re: Me, myself and I. by darby pyn |
15-Dec-03/12:23 PM |
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That's lesson 1. Second grades over there --->
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| Re: Rebel Spirits by miraclemaker |
15-Dec-03/12:25 PM |
"fuck the pimps in striphouses
entrapping and stealing free
souls desperate to profit on
the exhibition of sexuality." This one's a bit off.
I believe there's more here at work than what you've given us, but the rest are tight. Here's a 9.
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| Re: high school tragedy number six by FreeFormFixation |
15-Dec-03/12:35 PM |
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15-Dec-03/1:03 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Dec-03/8:38 PM |
I finished it, and that's saying a lot. lol.
The third stanza is the weakest, and ironically, that's what it's about. And since it's the crux that's where it should be the strongest.
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| Re: Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485 |
20-Dec-03/12:29 PM |
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What truly impressed me about this poem was my inability to even get through the first line, bravo brilliant.
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| Re: mothers by biggy |
20-Dec-03/12:33 PM |
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You mum are a broken paerl nexlace part timing as a gloew in tha dark anal beads. This 0 pretty much sums up how I feel about vulva.
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| Re: Paint Remover by Samantha |
20-Dec-03/12:35 PM |
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I often find running over something at a high rate of speed alleviates this sort of tension.
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11-Jan-04/3:54 PM |
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| Re: New commandments by little_big_nose |
11-Jan-04/10:29 PM |
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"Tho"? What are you stupid? The word is 'thou' you fucking ass. You should paint ball the inside of your mouth you fucking daft tit.
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| Re: So Much**coment this sucks. I want to make it better by Freethinker1602 |
27-Jan-04/12:05 PM |
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Well... that was an exploding lukewarm dildo.
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20-Feb-04/3:54 PM |
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Dude, you dare smear of the Spuna in the same bun as CLS? Are you mad, you've done us a severe injustice here, you trout speckle.
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20-Feb-04/4:00 PM |
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Christ, this is a deflating pickle getting gangraped by some spilt mustard if I've ever seen such a thing. Congratulations on your custom idiocy, I hope it's contagious, and you kill yourself and millions of others that could care less! :)
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| Re: Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy |
20-Feb-04/6:56 PM |
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I bet you think you're heaven bound?
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| Re: Quest! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
20-Feb-04/7:13 PM |
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Dave, the only thing mysterious about you is how your bike hasn't exploded yet spraying speckled bananna seat all about the park trail.
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20-Feb-04/7:16 PM |
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By the way asshat? (urbane savvy) Would you say you suck in the illiteral sense? Because you do, and frightenly so. your poetry is so fucking unbelievably boring and strait, you could wind a fart.
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20-Feb-04/9:16 PM |
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| Re: Monogamy by BrandonW |
20-Feb-04/9:19 PM |
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21-Mar-04/12:51 PM |
Nice thesis 5.
Overall, I can't really concur because
you said absolutely squat.
But I gave you a 5, because you're my nigger Joe.
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