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mothers (Lyric) by biggy
across a hundred oceans along a thousand miles around the coastal regions down the river nile i searched but could not find one that came close to your kkind. if ever there is reincarnation - a chance to live life with another, i'll be set for damnation if i have you nooot as my mother. 'cuz mothers are dear mothers are rare mothers are jewels that can't be shared mothers are priceless - more like paerls but you,mum, are the queen of all pearls.

Up the ladder: O dear.
Down the ladder: Tipspit

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9361
Posted: December 20, 2003 5:10 AM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2003 5:10 AM PST
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[8] Quarton @ 12.217.221.61 | 20-Dec-03/9:59 AM | Reply
Different but I liked it. Quite rhythmic and a sincere
tribute. Not sure about the exlusion of capital letters
butI have written some the same.
[0] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 20-Dec-03/12:33 PM | Reply
You mum are a broken paerl nexlace part timing as a gloew in tha dark anal beads. This 0 pretty much sums up how I feel about vulva.
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