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mothers (Lyric) by biggy

across a hundred oceans along a thousand miles around the coastal regions down the river nile i searched but could not find one that came close to your kkind. if ever there is reincarnation - a chance to live life with another, i'll be set for damnation if i have you nooot as my mother. 'cuz mothers are dear mothers are rare mothers are jewels that can't be shared mothers are priceless - more like paerls but you,mum, are the queen of all pearls.

Quarton 20-Dec-03/9:59 AM
Different but I liked it. Quite rhythmic and a sincere
tribute. Not sure about the exlusion of capital letters
butI have written some the same.




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