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20 most recent comments by horus8 (61-80) and replies

Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 22-Dec-04/11:42 PM
What's classy? Just curious...
Raping haikus with your puberty
doused ideas about what poetry
Means to a 17 year old?
Perhaps, straddling over
the mouth of Freeverse
And pinching a loaf of love?
Please, take your mediocrity
to the showers. Everyone knows
A villanelle is a purposely forced
Rhyming couplet, that's the point
You tit. My extremely DEEP poem
happens to have DEEPER meanings
Like Sodomy, war, and biscuits.

Good Evening,

Sincerely,

-=Horus8_Of_The_Eights=-
Re: a comment on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Dec-04/11:15 PM
Retribution, you asswagon.
Re: The Slave by Bhaskaryya 22-Dec-04/11:07 PM
Sounds like that neeger wants a leetle white wheestle.
Re: Andrew part II by Spindle 22-Dec-04/11:03 PM
"Absolute chestnut!!" I could not best this comment, so here it is again. (For some reason every time I read it, I burst).
Re: a comment on Andrew part II by Spindle 22-Dec-04/11:02 PM
ha ha ha... that gave me a cackle, LEMONAIDS.
Re: I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe 22-Dec-04/11:00 PM
The raping of a wet hand towel.
Re: Drowned in Free Verse by auscot 22-Dec-04/10:59 PM
Funny
Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove 22-Dec-04/10:57 PM
You must be a gothic marauder.
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 22-Dec-04/11:17 AM
I can tell you are 17, you're an idiot.
Re: Impatience always backfires 913 by notule 22-Dec-04/1:31 AM
Flucked
Re: The Wandering Jew by Lifeboatman 22-Dec-04/1:27 AM
lol, yep
Re: Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears 22-Dec-04/1:19 AM
Nicely done.
Re: What is that I seek again? by Bhaskaryya 22-Dec-04/1:16 AM
A cliche homerun of shit.
Talk about forced rhyme?
What about forced plain old
Bad droll writing? This
Is a plate full of nut sack.
Re: Into My World by sliver 21-Dec-04/4:34 PM
Any fuck that cries on a rose, and then tries to turn it into shit poetry should be SHOT.
Re: The wreck of a Memphis-Atlanta Greyhound by zodiac 17-Dec-04/2:37 PM
Furny...
Re: a comment on Where's Jeremi B. Handrinos? by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 17-Dec-04/2:17 PM
Ummm... I've really had a great laugh about all of this, but I was wondering if you might take it down if I cryed uncle? Because, leaving this link in my other areas like on my blog and especially on my cdbaby page as a review was particularly embarrasing, and not very gentleman like conduct, so could you please desist in defaming my character it would mean a great deal to myself and my family, thank you.
Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry 17-Dec-04/10:10 AM
Best thing I've ever read... Today anyway.
Re: At Sunset by Bobjim 11-Dec-04/8:45 PM
You hit every cliche known to man like a homerun of shit. Good one, somehow you pulled it off.
Re: a comment on The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8 11-Dec-04/8:20 PM
Yeah, crack will do that.
Re: Maiden, Maiden by blindwriter 20-Nov-04/5:41 PM
Transvestites selling lube do not a maiden make.


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