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| Re: Mangled by Carvaceous |
29-Dec-02/3:49 PM |
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malchovich..malchovich..malchovich.p
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29-Dec-02/5:56 PM |
"two fragile breasts"
"my mediocre nose"
what? no trout pond?
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29-Dec-02/5:58 PM |
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fall might be drop, but the balls should definitely be idling chainsaws.
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| Re: Instantly by Quarton |
29-Dec-02/6:26 PM |
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29-Dec-02/11:03 PM |
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NEVER! my trout. my precious.
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30-Dec-02/6:18 PM |
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thanks settle. i couldn't of said it better myself. i owe you one.
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1-Jan-03/12:52 PM |
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cut vertically, not horizontally for a quicker bleeding. did you mean for this poem to be unspecific and universal? it's pretty good. 7
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| Re: Track.... by Topaz Servias |
1-Jan-03/5:56 PM |
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| Re: The Birds by lunar |
1-Jan-03/6:00 PM |
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| Re: Forgotten by famenglory |
1-Jan-03/6:18 PM |
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"Here's a secret, as the hourglass turns, you don't get any younger"you're kidding? nice secret, by the way you are really on a role now..here let me help you out.0 why? because you're metaphoric, and genuine.t
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| Re: the play by famenglory |
1-Jan-03/6:25 PM |
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"orsmiles on thier" before you attempt to get crafty nb you should, perhaps. spell check.
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1-Jan-03/6:43 PM |
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| Re: She Seeks To Know Me by newdawnfades |
1-Jan-03/6:48 PM |
"and lost like tears in rain." try
lost as my tears in her rain.
"through my body, in to my soul." how about 'into instead of in to...?a
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| Re: The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> |
1-Jan-03/6:56 PM |
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did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t
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| Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub |
1-Jan-03/7:05 PM |
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an unsent letter?GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD...A POEMRANKER MUST READ..wonder no longer.@
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/3:05 PM |
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yes. i do. this is a great and grand poem. golden que tip. 10.
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/3:09 PM |
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and whoever gavev this a zero, shouuld immeiately go wash their mouth out with soup, that's right...i said soup. motherfucker, sorry for the french, but this poem does not deserve a zero, or anything less than a six, and i'll prove that. watch.a
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| Re: The dance by purplestain |
3-Jan-03/1:42 AM |
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sorry, i thought you were a girl i new from butterfield, minn. if you can believe that....strong poem, simple, and see how well it worked! a universal theme and feel to it, i wouldn't be suprised if more people responded to this the way i did. have an eight.
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| Re: Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Jan-03/3:06 AM |
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hey da. did i do this right? i'm unsure.
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