on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 3:21 PM
An abominable snow yam
on Play by Lifeboatman
17 Sep 2004, 10:44 PM
Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2004, 3:35 PM
I read this to my meatloaf, and it literally moaned.
on ONCE(revised) by jroday
22 Sep 2004, 3:54 PM
A quartered pine nut.
on Scar Gazing by thepinkbunnyofdoom
22 Sep 2004, 3:59 PM
A grammaric nightmare, but there's some salvagable stuff in there, somewhere.
on A Fistful of Ass Haiku by HaikuMofo
22 Sep 2004, 4:00 PM
A lit queef -=8=-
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2004, 4:01 PM
ha ha, yes.
on The Dovina Limericks by Everyone
22 Sep 2004, 4:02 PM
A jewel, a real gem.
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2004, 4:49 PM
Lovely
on Screws by helenwales
22 Sep 2004, 4:52 PM
Another swell read.
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2004, 4:52 PM
bling bling.
on Put it away! by Special Needs
30 Sep 2004, 3:42 PM
Rubbish
on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik
30 Sep 2004, 3:44 PM
A laquered quail in pose.
on Coldfront by klosterfobik
30 Sep 2004, 3:46 PM
I bet you thought I wasn't going to push flush huh? because of your besplatterment of mine fine scrolls? Think again.
on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha
30 Sep 2004, 3:48 PM
Trill, like nuding with lark.
on Anemone Drowning by D. $ Fontera
30 Sep 2004, 3:50 PM
lol
on To Leave a Trace by Dovina
17 Oct 2004, 8:57 AM
Your writing's getting stronger, but
God the way your mind works... Is ah...
Bland.
God the way your mind works... Is ah...
Bland.
on the battle for troy by oneglove
17 Oct 2004, 9:06 AM
Your knowledge of history needs a good punting.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2004, 9:11 AM
Twat (Splayit) by Squasha
I was passing my hallway's mirror when
A solemn twat leapt out and swallowed
me whole. Odd, I thought, for a twat to
leap? Since we all know snail have false feet!
I was passing my hallway's mirror when
A solemn twat leapt out and swallowed
me whole. Odd, I thought, for a twat to
leap? Since we all know snail have false feet!