regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-03/1:17 PM
Have no fear! It's impossible to burn down a desert.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Aug-03/12:14 PM
What text is that? English lit 101? Convert to what? The government stopped researching alternate fuel sources since the Muslims pants'd 'em.
Re: So Long for now by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Aug-03/12:19 PM
Be safe. Be well. Bring the good fight to the wishing well.
Re: True Respect (A Distant Adoration) by abecedarian	31-Aug-03/12:29 PM
"Perfume", but you know what? Who cares. this is a really fine example of poetic magic and universal appeal. this is exactly what young, self absorbed poets like bristol line swaft are missing. The spark of mystery and magic and a connection to your audience. 10.
Re: Loki's Tryst by OneFingerAnswer	31-Aug-03/12:32 PM
Sleipner, Odin's horse. I love mythology. Way to go, and you didn't give anything away either. Awesome.
Re: The Love Poem by William Delacroix	31-Aug-03/12:37 PM
It looks like your aeorta is about to blow a bubble. The end's a bit cliched.
Re: Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	1-Sep-03/1:13 PM
See, that's much better.
Re: A Cacodemon's Sermon: Message to a Eudemon by Y2kSlamPoet	1-Sep-03/2:54 PM
A finely crafted poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-03/3:02 PM
"Does the desert miss the rain?" Do you like that song? Your title is lame. Your attemmpt alone is crippled, but your sincerity deserves a 6.4. Which is a powerful earthquake in latin American standards.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-03/2:14 AM
Turd in your hat at the front door, get your coat and shovel off fag, nigger, bone between my teeth. in your last life your my bitch and I hated your first name.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-03/7:49 PM
Yes. That's the one I've seen and loved.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-03/7:54 PM
I see you're prepared. Since he will be coming in and out of your ass. Idiot. I would like to kick your fucking teeth in, earnestly, and shit down your gum hole, but you are to stupid to get the gist of who I am, so burn slow and timid with your vacant god.
Re: An Offering to the Deity that is Me by razorgrin	8-Sep-03/10:09 PM
Hi, I've missed you. 10.
Re: St. Andrews by Nicholas Jones	11-Sep-03/1:12 PM
Becoming.
Re: Sigh to e.e's Springtime by SP REYNOLDS	11-Sep-03/2:18 PM
Damn that's fine craftsmanship Seany boy. Guess who's at my house? My mom. Heeky noodly do. Isn't that odd? I'm finding closure. lol
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-03/2:20 PM
Great title, blawzay quip. 7
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-03/12:13 PM
Golden Que Tip Award.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-03/12:15 PM
This is just lovely. A perfect read.
Re: Giger cider by grendal	12-Sep-03/3:36 PM
You are way ahead of your time. for a fifteen year old, this is a remarkable piece.
Re: Evicition notices & hang nails by grendal	12-Sep-03/3:44 PM
And eviction. but for your age attempting a vilanelle is brave and noteworthy, congratulations, but you spell for shit.