on Scythe by Isis
21 Nov 2003, 7:37 PM
I would keep the last line and lose the rest.
on Waiting for my Beautiful Woman by Win
21 Nov 2003, 7:41 PM
Semen, is often mistaken as goats milk by Catholics.
on some deleted poem
21 Nov 2003, 7:43 PM
I'm a crambler too.
on The Callous by sunfloweronfire
21 Nov 2003, 7:44 PM
Jesus was a Satanist.
on The Pedestal And Promised Land by Judas kiss
22 Nov 2003, 12:39 AM
I liked it.
on Teenage Guidance by Shit-Crumpets
23 Nov 2003, 7:52 PM
Th bonus? A bed that fold up into the wall with oxygen masks and to many nicle slots = vibrate than I care to recite.
on Ode to my Poopy by Samantha
24 Nov 2003, 4:11 PM
I thought it said poppy. lol.
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
26 Nov 2003, 8:46 PM
Letting go for Jesu, though I'm no Jew (Beeric) by No one (Free verse) by horus8
I aint no couchey comfort eagle
And I aint no swingin' chunk o sac
Got my fair share of poetic doubles
And now there's no turning back
Thought I'd learnt from my previous swan dives
that the Lord takes his spuds with sour cream & chives
And when I needed my friends to pay?
They said "You have AIDS, and you are gay".
So I jumped anyway like Wile E. Coyote.
Another whitey on display, trippin' on peyote
stuffed Frioles.
But I'm letting go for Jesu
We're gonna smoke da kind bowl
Yeah I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna get catty on my pole.
When life has got your number
And you're livin' in the gutter
Then welcome to my world, Scutter (Like in Carnivale)
It ain't all spread out with duck butter
Billy Jean streets is all you'll get
And all you gotta do is go Chet (Like in Weird Science)
'cos when life knocks you up, brother
You don't always pull a Pink Panther
and fuck a 'sick' transexual belly dancer.
But I'm letting go for a Jesu
He's gonna keep me real sane
Yeah I'm letting go for your Jesu
and all his rocked up cocaine.
Well I found myself in cheap whiskey
And I held myself on piped smack
Knew I'd hit top drawer, oh baby
Though I'd lost my favourite Hackey Sackey
But I opened up my beef heart to you
Turned over a brand new dark sheet
I dedicate my life, Jesu
My art, my heart, my feet
Feet cleaning is what you do.
that's why I fell in love with you.
Yeah, I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna scrape my last bowl
Yeah I'm holding on for Jesu
He's gonna save my soul
He's gonna stoke my coal
He's worth the big let go
Ask little Joe from KOKOMO
and the dragonless from Komodo.
I aint no couchey comfort eagle
And I aint no swingin' chunk o sac
Got my fair share of poetic doubles
And now there's no turning back
Thought I'd learnt from my previous swan dives
that the Lord takes his spuds with sour cream & chives
And when I needed my friends to pay?
They said "You have AIDS, and you are gay".
So I jumped anyway like Wile E. Coyote.
Another whitey on display, trippin' on peyote
stuffed Frioles.
But I'm letting go for Jesu
We're gonna smoke da kind bowl
Yeah I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna get catty on my pole.
When life has got your number
And you're livin' in the gutter
Then welcome to my world, Scutter (Like in Carnivale)
It ain't all spread out with duck butter
Billy Jean streets is all you'll get
And all you gotta do is go Chet (Like in Weird Science)
'cos when life knocks you up, brother
You don't always pull a Pink Panther
and fuck a 'sick' transexual belly dancer.
But I'm letting go for a Jesu
He's gonna keep me real sane
Yeah I'm letting go for your Jesu
and all his rocked up cocaine.
Well I found myself in cheap whiskey
And I held myself on piped smack
Knew I'd hit top drawer, oh baby
Though I'd lost my favourite Hackey Sackey
But I opened up my beef heart to you
Turned over a brand new dark sheet
I dedicate my life, Jesu
My art, my heart, my feet
Feet cleaning is what you do.
that's why I fell in love with you.
Yeah, I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna scrape my last bowl
Yeah I'm holding on for Jesu
He's gonna save my soul
He's gonna stoke my coal
He's worth the big let go
Ask little Joe from KOKOMO
and the dragonless from Komodo.
on Mr Zero? Your a coward. by DreamerSupreme
26 Nov 2003, 8:58 PM
Been there.
on Im gonna draw a picture w/ a twist by ShelliAnne
28 Nov 2003, 1:32 PM
lol. Indeed, as will your relationship with the house cleaner.
on As You Are by MacFrantic
28 Nov 2003, 1:37 PM
Cocca.
on some deleted poem
28 Nov 2003, 1:39 PM
"As I weight this risk I will take." weigh?.
Otherwise, decent. Happy gobbling.
Otherwise, decent. Happy gobbling.
on Catspotting with Hitler & a nigger cat by SupremeDreamer
28 Nov 2003, 6:08 PM
I like that movie. I like Ghazals. I licks that shit, and then swats it off the table and shit.
on some deleted poem
28 Nov 2003, 10:25 PM
You are an odd bird.
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2003, 1:56 PM
Cute.
on Poem for my neon guitar consorts by DreamerSupreme
29 Nov 2003, 2:02 PM
""He gripped her thigh, and death smiled."
"The bus will give you a hard-on with books in your lap"
"I'm sick of these stinky boots, I'll never wake up in a good mood again".
Jim Morisson.
"The bus will give you a hard-on with books in your lap"
"I'm sick of these stinky boots, I'll never wake up in a good mood again".
Jim Morisson.
on some deleted poem
1 Dec 2003, 2:15 PM
fatwabulous.