| Re: I'll Miss You by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/2:09 PM |
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Jesus Christ lose the commas, and buy a theasaurus, or atleast read a little Arthur Rimbaud.
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| Re: Where are you Eric? by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/3:03 PM |
Ther are no amount of words imaginable to describe this poem. A nucleur missile, arsenic and a desserted island might be the only cures left for you to cleanse the residue from your mind if you read this pointless self indulgent abomination. Eric here is some advice read more write less and don't use the word soul more then ten times in any piece of writing.
Subscribe to poets and writers magazine as soon as possible and join the Iowa workshop and pray for redemption. William burroughs is currently crawling out of his grave to find you and forbid you from ever picking up A PEN AGAIN. STICK TO COMPUTERS. PLEASE.o
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
9-Jul-02/5:44 PM |
What no Joshua, no Aaron, no trumpets! maybe Sodom and Gamora would have been a better subject.
Nice spacing though??
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Jul-02/5:49 PM |
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Oh geez you're so sophisticated and witty. obviously open minded and well educated. you should go to a children's hospital and read that in the pediatric aids ward. I'm sure you would really make they're fucking day if not surely enlighten them.a
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Jul-02/6:04 PM |
You and Dark Angel should get together and write children's books you have so much to offer the world. Really, I mean it. It's just fucking amazing how much you guys say without saying, writing, or even remotely trying. I truly am in awe.
Could you guys possibly share your last functioning brain cell with me
before you trade it in for some real fucking talent!r
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| Re: To Mother by lynnstratton |
9-Jul-02/6:17 PM |
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touching to say the least
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Jul-02/7:29 PM |
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Try a little elmers glue, and a trip to the public libraryl
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| Re: Luna Moth by razorgrin |
9-Jul-02/7:32 PM |
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hear that pop and crackle? that was your moth hitting a bug lighte
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| Re: guilty mind by Angel_of_fait |
9-Jul-02/7:39 PM |
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do us a favor stay in the shower,or try to get out of the house little more.
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| Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin |
10-Jul-02/12:35 PM |
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Well done. Intense. Extremely passionate. It truly is a joy to see a luscious maple leaf collector so dedicated to her work, bravo, kudo,s and hat trick manifestos to you straight edge, oh wait a minute! I gotta go apparerntly my entire state is sinking. I better save my pet tarantula and crackwhore (they can't swim) ciaop
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| Re: IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) by coalcracker |
10-Jul-02/12:58 PM |
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| Re: i will bare it: by Sapphire |
10-Jul-02/1:36 PM |
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A lovely piece, gorgeous and lonelyy
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Jul-02/2:06 PM |
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You should be more carefull if you cross dress and go on a binge in TJ
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| Re: Let's Do a Test by GAC |
10-Jul-02/2:08 PM |
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Sweet yams your blueberrys jam!???
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| Re: Succulent Fruit by Jody Conn |
10-Jul-02/2:12 PM |
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Chicks on bikes river dikes!a
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