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20 most recent comments by horus8 (2961-2980)

Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin 20-Jul-02/12:28 AM
I would like to say that i was dissapointed with your pathetic involuntary lack of description(as you were with my poem ashes) but if you look at the date that i wrote mine( ten years ago) when i was a herion addict and just getting out of prison, but i won't i'm not that pathetically
critical. i just remember what my pain fed me for and why. i don't have to make shit up to get attention. i'm honest and balanced. what's your excuse? Canada, a shitty mall job. dad get mad cuz you pierced your clit. quit looking for excuses. grow up and understand some people write from the heart. Depraved spoiled brats write from the mall. comprende? some people experience worse things in life then just being bored and angry about shit that doesn't matter. try traveling and getting a real job it might help. emphasise on the word might. razora
Re: One Nation Under God by GAC 22-Jul-02/12:14 PM
Cod, is great. Cod, is good. And with tarter sauce it makes me pray and turn into Tony Robbins i dance around and hypnotize people to have more respect for one nation under Cod. Indispensible, with property and twelve step programs for all
Re: R'lyeh by razorgrin 22-Jul-02/12:24 PM
Hey Razora, how ya feeling today. You want a scone. it's from the Hamptons and wrapped in about "fifteen pounds" (the weight of your left breast) of gullibility, You wanna split it with me??
Re: Walls by razorgrin 22-Jul-02/12:37 PM
Since you're working with the government... I was thinking that my friend Gary Condit is hiring.. well you being an "inturn" "intern" "intorn" and all. Just looking out for friends (by the way nice poem up there i gave you a seven)( cuz of the walls the wolves and the howling, you know all of that "deep shit" any way gotta go get more coffee to sit here all day(since i work at home) when i'm not performing, that way i can smoke a fat joint, lean back, and really start to put more effort into understanding our relationship. cuz i'm concerned. with luv, the son of isis.r
Re: HERE TO THERE by ARTIE 22-Jul-02/12:47 PM
Sounds like twelve hours on mushrooms before the panick disperses and the better half of the cycle begins. nice shape and power word use.t
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Jul-02/12:55 PM
At first i thought this is fuckin ridiculous. then magicaly your mood of sincerity set in , and i felt what you wanted people to feel when they read it, reassured, and at peace. normally i tend to hate shite like this but maybe it's what i needed to read today, thankst
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Jul-02/1:00 PM
that sappy poet was John Lennon "all you need is love" and love does conquer, but doubt is forever the first edible sin that Pandora fed us. It sneaks up on you. lovely tone to your worke
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Jul-02/3:02 PM
Jung wrote a book called "flying saucers"
I mixed the symbolism with male prostitution "hustling" and the spider represents the "money and the future hopes of getting a real job" the whale reps the way I'd rather be feeling and the rest is history??
Re: Stranger by mytenderrage 22-Jul-02/3:25 PM
nothing over something times -god over everything equals life. Math don't lie.
Re: Craving by mytenderrage 22-Jul-02/3:31 PM
tis a raven tap tap tap outside my window.
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Jul-02/3:38 PM
the winning recipe..
Re: Walls by razorgrin 22-Jul-02/4:08 PM
hey, don't get down on yourself.. there's nothing wrong with typing or answering phones. it's an honest trade.???
Re: "The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" by david 22-Jul-02/4:09 PM
this is the beginning of a classic for christs saKE FINISH the damn thing.. please. i'm interested now don't leave me hangingl
Re: Green by tiamat 22-Jul-02/4:22 PM
Well Tiamat for being a three headed dragon (female opposite of baphomet) on the thirty sixth level of the abyss your suprisingly tender
Re: Bandages of the Beast by Kashi 22-Jul-02/4:27 PM
The secret teachings of all ages "manley p. hall"h
Re: Hands. by LucidRevelation 22-Jul-02/4:34 PM
Tell me more about your hands. i have a refined doll-fetish. is all seriousness i luv this poem it's poignantly supernatural and divine
Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin 22-Jul-02/5:59 PM
Fine.. lets.. i'll make a serious effort to be empathetic from now on. promise. ASLS
Re: The Poison by TheTiredTyrant 22-Jul-02/6:01 PM
Strichnine is best served cold. Revenge a turnip enima, my love tireless
Re: Existence; Part 1 by ARTIE 22-Jul-02/6:08 PM
Dear Lime. please plop, sighned, your coronan
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Jul-02/6:44 PM
My avacado and oatmeal face mask has just spontaneously combusted. help me find my nose between pearljammed toes..


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