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20 most recent comments by horus8 (2581-2600)

Re: Pissing Rant by brazen 14-Aug-02/12:12 PM
fuck yeah this wins the horus8 AWARD FOR CLOSED FIST BIRTH DAY WISH STAND FAST CAPTAINS MAST award for outstanding achievement in the art of building scarecrows that walk and talk. this is truly a ball of rage 9/10b
Re: Derailed by brazen 14-Aug-02/12:18 PM
you had drueling for the end then you let me down..facts! facts! what are facts put an opinion in the hand of a money fisted mannipulator?the line between opinion and fact goes in one nostril and out the other..like the bank of a river, or the admiration of a younger brother.a
Re: Alone by Lil_Chick_512 14-Aug-02/12:30 PM
of course they care, that's why you're still around to write this. i was kinda hoping for a little more graphic violence, i was expecting evil dead part 2, instead i got a hello kitty slumber party, and i was not even invited...i look great in drag especially with a steak knife and no friends........suicide.realism.sadism.shirt-tales.killer-whales.welcome back kotter lunch box...h
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Aug-02/4:24 PM
in the name of bob, what more in the name of bob...bob you are staring down the barrel of thick calcium richness...my kale gun bob..open up..cuz you are starving man...starving for inspiration..FIRE!!
Re: Strange but true by ==Doylum 14-Aug-02/4:32 PM
horus8 AWARD FOR GETTING ALL THAT OUT WITH A MOUTH FULL OF MASHED POTATOS award goes to "danny boy" this afternoon.this piece is fucking hilarious i've already e-mailed it to the holy ghost and all of his disciples. your face is splendid! 9/10..
Re: The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8 14-Aug-02/5:31 PM
yeah..i know..i know, it's a really old piece, but i kinda enjoyed editing it for this site by leaving in the childish shit cuz it is so fucking silly sounding and cutesy..i thought fuck it..it's more homely that way. nobody likes a writer that can't laugh at their own adolescent whining and pining, and i'ts interesting to compare it to what i'm doing now..i think?..ah fuck it anyways..moving on..
Re: A piece i shall never play again by ==Doylum 14-Aug-02/5:35 PM
what a riot...definetly a rockford fosgate 12" woofer. 8/10??
Re: diving by keatsImnot 14-Aug-02/5:37 PM
de capitilize..and quit screaming..it would be so much better underwater quitely rendered 7/10. hocus.jaundice.lice.malicey
Re: Learning Self by nentwined 14-Aug-02/5:42 PM
link to delink...i think? compact is a stretch to say the least...7/10...i love your site..it's better than playing captain von trap in the sound of music (don't tell anyone).
Re: Going to River Phoenix in my mind by horus8 14-Aug-02/6:07 PM
really? i just don't think you have jehova witnesses or mormans waking you up at 8:00 in the morning in england...get it now?..salesman....reversed epileptic fit...hard-on in the morning answering your door to children in uniform selling the word of god, scaring them away cuz your naked with wood and nut's..cuz you scare everyone away of late cuz you stay up day and night writing?...fucking forget it... go right about another sea for christs sake.. isn't there like 50 of those to chose from...mr. bog?
Re: white harvest by <~> 14-Aug-02/6:43 PM
tell me about it..fucking mail..and stamps..and mce outfitted anthrax carriers ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. no me pen...no me pen...no me pen...me no see.ahhhhhhhhhh. i need an accountant, more than another joint.more than charlie sheen and listerine....7/10p
Re: Hamptons by bondjedi 14-Aug-02/7:21 PM
god isn't that the truth...to see the further adventures of ms.stewart read my poem black liqourice & g-stringed orphans...lovely tale ..and this is a poignant haiku,good for you 8/10o
Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 14-Aug-02/7:34 PM
that song is so fucking powerful...i love that whole album now that i think about it.... i wrote the piece for michelle covalle...i was the one that o.deed' though..i flipped us around alot in the poem...she's happily married now in michigan with a beautiful son 'joshua'...we still talk, it was my faith in us that really died that die...a part of me never left that fucking place..thank god for my ability to cocoon, or i would be in bad, bad shape about right now..thank you it helps me heal..
Re: white harvest by <~> 14-Aug-02/8:10 PM
now that's funny (comment to "danny boy"...<brought to you by 'trap door' the only way to say goodbye.> hi z..o
Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 14-Aug-02/8:49 PM
yeah...i was just watching oliver stone's heaven and earth...no wonder we lost that war ..it's like hamburger hill, but spiritually from the other side..what are you up to?.
Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 14-Aug-02/10:24 PM
she worked for tardec in michigan, and i got kicked out of the navy, so i had to find under the table jobs for a long time (bad conduct discharge), while she worked for the government.. we used to argue about what path was more rewarding, something like that, you no? i was anti gov, she was gov...we were a hell of a couple...what kinda beer you drinking? i'm drinking red, red wine.. i
Re: Going to River Phoenix in my mind by horus8 15-Aug-02/11:31 AM
it's a mad, mad mixture indeed...i definitely see how it could be the late night key jingle blues, but about 4 yrs ago i was doing alot of morphine and alot of writing, and things got really ugly..i would walk around naked with my sling shot and shoot oranges out of the neighbors trees....friends would check on me and stuff and my girlfriend would sometimes prep me a meal, but mostly people were giving me the sign of the cross. i would faint in mid conversation and collapse and piss on myself and stuff it was really over the top and self destructive, but perfect for getting salesman away from your door, or mormons or jehova witnesses, plus i did write alot.. that counts for something..i think. gout.crabs.gangrene.cherries.shrine.
Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 15-Aug-02/11:43 AM
morning z.. merlot of course...sierra nevada makes a lovely pale ale, but their blue label porter is to die for, their stouts aren't too bad either...pardon me while i suck the druel off of my desk..well then...??
Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 15-Aug-02/12:11 PM
Babbit, and brazen...the b squad...yes brazen i am a shellback and a blue nose both were pointless hazing techniques to seperate the boys from the menses, you gotta love frat-house-boat-rides..anyway babbit i read a piece of yours yesterday where you were driving by your old house, and trippin on this lady laughing at an unseen visitor or something...what an image to build off of..left me wanting to jump in my car and try it out...i will as soon as this fear of the outside world subsides o
Re: school reunion by irishfolksuicide 15-Aug-02/12:33 PM
it was only a matter of time before elipses reared their hydra heads again, but all your friends will be there?.to help you push the penny around the toilet seat one last time for life luck and good measure...i fuckin hated school, and those who were cool, and p.e coach O'toole. don't go! mines this year too..i sent them a reply in the form of white powder enveloped...crusaders MARCH! one two three four..one. forgive me jesu' for blaming poo.


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