on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT
11 Nov 2002, 5:58 PM
i never scan.. i read than hop around naked going "fiji" "fiji"...i was interested straight through...it might just be heart singing barracuda in the background...that song always makes me smile though aint that the truth.9.
on the shape by w~* ATHENA *~w
10 Nov 2002, 10:54 PM
the last time the warm came without sound..well..i peed my pants...this is yOUR best work yet. here's a 10. cheers.
on I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=-
10 Nov 2002, 11:02 PM
once again..you have boldly gone where no man has gone before...so here's my question to you, did you find my watch?
on Picnic Of Love by -=SeTTle=-
10 Nov 2002, 10:50 PM
have you seen mary? after all of secret whispers and unprotected ass sex...you go and do this! my friends and family warned me they said you were just a playa and a pimp, but i trusted you...now i have nothing...you and the ants have carried off my last watermelon...i am lonely, and gay...again.
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2002, 11:17 PM
well that was moving. but it is no noseless dog. heres a ticket to a clippers game. enjoy.9
on My Woman, My Lover, My Friend by -=SeTTle=-
10 Nov 2002, 11:25 PM
"my hearts like a butterfly with flowers to give" is reason enough for me to finally get up the nerve to write stephen king that letter about how his acting in creepshow changed my life. forever. oh..."loving juice fruit" wasn't shabby neither.
on Familiarity by Rumidi
10 Nov 2002, 11:32 PM
gandi eat your heart out. then your spinach. 8.
on The Funnyman by Christof
10 Nov 2002, 11:43 PM
let me guess. jerry springer's inevitable future. quite a remarkably stimulating piece...not a ten inch vibrator with a nickname though, but here's a nine all the same.
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2002, 11:45 PM
i'm gonna have to go with what's behind curtain number three. then a good shampoo and cut.
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2002, 12:03 AM
remove asterick then capitalize, and after him...fuck it! clear the dining room..why stop there take your fork to capitol hill and be like "hey...FORK YOU!"..bastards. p.s by the way ..fork yourself he's not even cfose to being a dictator you twit, jesus christ! must i teach the youth of america everything. he's a filthy ritck brat with money and pull who's been living in a cave since their war with russia...who do you think trained him? we did you twit..thank reagan and bush and your parents for putting them and him there. there. 6.
on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Nov 2002, 10:30 AM
this one always makes me cry. i'm going to just give it a curtsie and a hang nail.k
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 11:20 PM
jesus christ..i fucking quit. i'm gonna move to aspen and train children in the art of avalanching the village and cheering up the ugly yeti. farewell.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 10:34 AM
who's the moisture in god's cup. who's the hootanannie from cincinnati? that would be...the inventor of the frisbee...dr. spock!
on you are my concert by snacktime
4 Nov 2002, 9:41 PM
i'm giving this a nine, it's very good and interesting and all that alluring shite, but the structure needs some a bit more water tight integrity. 8.
on the queen of carts by snacktime
4 Nov 2002, 9:43 PM
another splendid thrust...here's a seven.all bad girls deserve a seven unless you're a man..than your an eight for making me need your shaft that much more. 7.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 9:47 PM
jesus christ...i'm your brother for christ sake have a little respect for the family name..whatever that might be. 9.
on The Washing by strider1
4 Nov 2002, 9:50 PM
i would of enjoyed the coffee maker a bit more, as far as things getting shut off go....here's an 8. even though i really think you're a wretched shite. 8.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 2:46 PM
i suggest you listen to a little more of primus's pork soda before you go and try to get 'flashy on us'
it must be that wedge of maple twixt your two front teeeth. i'll give you a 1 for the absolutely pointless use of an asterick button. 1.
it must be that wedge of maple twixt your two front teeeth. i'll give you a 1 for the absolutely pointless use of an asterick button. 1.
on IF Now! by feathers68
12 Nov 2002, 10:20 AM
what a mind fuck..JESUS! HA HA! unreal. not funny unreal...but kinda funny like a mouth full of shit. greatread...now in the dog bowl with you.
on Youth Fair by daniella
5 Nov 2002, 12:11 PM
i will keep this in mind when i go to my ten year reunion in a few months. lovely.