| Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman |
6-Jul-02/10:37 PM |
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i don't get it....but i like it. Is that wrong?
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7-Jul-02/9:00 PM |
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i am laughing my ass off...this is classic. love it!
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| Re: the truth about poets by New Life Drug |
4-Sep-02/7:18 PM |
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interesting...you spelled Poets wrong though towards the end =/
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| Re: remember me by Katie |
5-Sep-02/2:29 PM |
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I love the line "I'm the Glimpse you caught out of the corner of your eye." I liked the structure of your poem as well, but there were far too many typos and other mechanical errors.
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| Re: Tearz of a Thug Misses by tearz_of_a_thug_mami |
5-Sep-02/2:49 PM |
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ooh girl this is so ghetto. Keep doin' your thang. Much props! = )
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| Re: Work by poetandknowit |
5-Sep-02/9:13 PM |
"the last paycheck
that dwindles more each day
because of the phone service
and support the daughter and
former wife need to get by." I think it's brilliant. It has a great rhythm! Never thought the woes of paying bills could sound so purty. =)
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| Re: Life : Paradox by amateurR |
18-Sep-02/8:13 PM |
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"Life: so our own yet so not" That is sooo true. I love that line!
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| Re: Chuds in the mall by razorgrin |
20-Sep-02/12:21 AM |
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| Re: Ouch by heroditus |
21-Sep-02/2:59 PM |
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haha! wise words. Nice haiku.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
21-Sep-02/3:08 PM |
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this was hilarious! I loved the part that goes "have a nice meal / Hope it poisons you" I often have those thoughts about certain individuals...damn bastards.
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| Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8 |
15-Aug-03/10:55 AM |
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"spit shined by my pain"...love it!
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| Re: facku by J.B. Manning |
18-Oct-03/9:14 PM |
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Ghirardelli totally ruined chocolate for me.
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