on your voice soothes me in the dark by rockinindividual
26 Dec 2002, 7:54 PM
Lovely, like your other poem...9
on The first gurl 2 eva hurt ma by Jazz_t
28 Dec 2002, 12:53 AM
r u & old man river lovers? Hooked on Phonics could possibly work for you, possibly not.
on One Country by poetandknowit
26 Dec 2002, 12:22 AM
lovely...10 How can anyone give this poem anything below an 8 beats the hell out of me.
on some deleted poem
28 Dec 2002, 12:45 AM
Are you trying to impress us with your language skills?...I'm not impressed. Stick with Ebonics...gunna...hahaaaaaa
on suicide weather and dreary imaginings do no good by xanthippe
28 Dec 2002, 12:50 AM
This is not a concrete......Don't waste our time and stick to pigeon watching, tractor driving and oreo eating....wait....these are Dan Garcia's activities....so maybe you can be the bathroom attendant...pass me moist towlette please...here's a quarter
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2002, 7:34 PM
You're suffering from decidophobia, the fear of making decisions.....characterized my intnse sweating when faced with a decision.........cure--I'm a world reknown self-help guru...I was featured on Oprah a nuber of times...Dr. Phil can kiss my ass...anyway, back to you...buy my book Decidophobia: When evil forces strike innocent hemaphrodites......it's available on amazon.com
on A Short Letter by Ranger
27 Dec 2002, 7:54 PM
this reminds me of my college crush...Alfred Magnanimi...a short, stocky, blue-eyed, Italian stallion....man I loved that kid...his ideas of saying I love you was I hate you....ahhhhhh...going down memory lane.......anyway good read...8
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2002, 7:58 PM
You talkin' to me?.....hahaaaaaa...I think I love you......10
on im playing basketball by rockinindividual
27 Dec 2002, 8:01 PM
you should try getting a 3lbs. box of assorted chocolates from Wal Mart and eating the whole box....that should take care of your anger.....ahhhhhh
on some deleted poem
26 Dec 2002, 7:40 PM
you actually went back to read this pimple faced, British semi-intellectual fag's comments....wow...that makes you a mullretard of the highest degree...BRAVO!!!...you've done it again lolipop...hahaaaaaaaaa...even a baboon has more intelligence thant that.......here's donation of $5 to the treatment of Downs Syndrome...just for you lolipop...hopefully they find a cure fast.
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2002, 3:00 AM
Another night of meeting cheezy, hair-geled Persians who claim to be Italian and to drive Ferrari when in fact they have a leased 1997 BMW and own a wholesale store in downtown......what the hell is wrong with this town...huh?????? She turns up the music and starts shaking her ass...you maybe right I maybe crazy but it just maybe a lunatic you're looking for...that comment had nothing to do with your poem well because your haiku is....you're as dry as a soldier from the freeman army in Montana...notice how your humor only appeals to 17 years old girls
on Your sacrifice by Crakyamuni
27 Dec 2002, 3:08 AM
is this a short story or a poem??? anyway, here's a 5 for shaving your head and meditating for 5 hours.... Are you a big Richard Gere and Ricky Martin fan?
on some deleted poem
25 Dec 2002, 5:47 PM
In the frenzy of modern life we lose sight of the real value of humanity. People become the sum total of what they produce. Human beings act like machines whose only function is to make money. Many people, like Dusel become so attached to wealth or at least the appearance of that they lose sight of what's really important in life. Anyway, I thought your poem was a fine piece of work....10
on some deleted poem
25 Dec 2002, 6:56 PM
BRIDGEVILLE, California (AP) -- A big chunk of Bridgeville is on the electronic auction block, with 80-plus acres, a mile and a half of riverbank, four cabins, nine houses, one cemetery and one backhoe for sale on eBay...asking price $750,000. Only in our great nation can you buy a fucking town on ebay.....soory that comment had nothing to do with your poem...but your poem is well, uhhh how should I put this....crap...
on Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly
25 Dec 2002, 1:45 AM
Ahhh, but false hopes make the world go round. For if you didn't have false hopes then your existance would be completely meaningless to say the least. Perhaps it is....but false hopes are there to keep you from seeing this...get it?..yes...here's a shot of tequila...oh...let's not forget to chew the worm...it's a good source of protein...
on Hot town, summer in the city! by bondjedi
25 Dec 2002, 5:55 PM
Sorry...I don't dig...although I do dig mullets..ahhhhhhh....
on im playing basketball by rockinindividual
27 Dec 2002, 8:19 PM
Are you a Tar Heel?
on Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84
25 Dec 2002, 6:59 PM
Are you old man river's retarded cousin? Yes, I thought so.
-B.