| Re: First move by aliena |
22-Dec-02/3:36 PM |
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for some odd reason I like the cheezy poem...but then again I love Celtic cheese...ahhhh....if you scratch my back I'll give you an oz.
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22-Dec-02/3:41 PM |
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I would change the last two lines...too many uses of "both"...other than that...quite good...9
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22-Dec-02/3:49 PM |
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Please don't show your true self if it's a reflection of your poetry...3
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22-Dec-02/4:14 PM |
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I think your love is my cousin, Ruby...a 280lbs sex phone operator. Give her a call 1900Lick
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22-Dec-02/4:31 PM |
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I'm not DARK ANGEL you pretentious British fag. I must say your poem is funny yet you're not. Here's a lolipop...shove it up your ass...8
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| Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/9:18 PM |
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Despite the negative comments, I actually quite like the poem. It looks like a poem that my college professor's assistant would write....have a 9
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23-Dec-02/9:37 PM |
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After listening to the Spice Girls and Take That no wonder you write shit like that....
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24-Dec-02/7:11 PM |
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What more can you expect from a dope smoking, sandal wearing, frat boy...you have as much intelligence as my big toe nail....2
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| Re: corners by rockinindividual |
24-Dec-02/7:34 PM |
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| Re: Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
24-Dec-02/9:10 PM |
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Lolipop you've outdone yourself..here's a 5 for you, Fellini and a porn-star midget named Bridgett......
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24-Dec-02/9:20 PM |
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Here's a 7 to rest stops, twinkies, ass cracks, and a transvestite named Libby...enjoy!
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| Re: Godly by brazen |
24-Dec-02/11:04 PM |
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Another poor me poem. Life's a bitch...get over it.....here you can have my family....cheers!
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| Re: the surrender by brazen |
25-Dec-02/12:34 AM |
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If this is for me...thank you...I enjoyed it...maybe I'll let you taste me but then you'll get tooth decay..ayyyyy...here's some Mentadent.
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| Re: guitar music and lies by w~* ATHENA *~w |
25-Dec-02/12:51 AM |
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Hmmmmm...I gather our lolipop is a womanizer and a jiggalo...you sound angry...6
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| Re: Thought by Quarton |
25-Dec-02/12:58 AM |
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Your poem reminds me of a Philosophy class I took in college. We spent a whole semester arguing dream vs. reality...how do you know you're not asleep right now...prove it. Anyway...maybe you should ponder on that idea for a while....8
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:05 AM |
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.....and they called it puppy love..oh I guess they'll never know (paul anka)....60s version of Timberlake....when you have to think about it then my sweet one...you're not in love....have an oreo...it will make you feel better....ahhhhh
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25-Dec-02/1:09 AM |
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Richa..short for Richard I suppose...quite good...I enjoyed it tremendously. A perfect 10 in my book.
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:22 AM |
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You're 16 right? Your poetry is good, but try to diversify the areas in which you write. Ahhh...my apologies madam...it's good to know that our youth knows who Paul Anka is....I'm in my early 20s...ahhh, but I feel old, older at least.
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:34 AM |
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It's around 4:30am in PA...you must be an insomniac like me...or maybe you can't sleep because Santa is bringing you lots of presents.....oooooh...open up the blue one..it's from me....ahhhh...a book of short poems by Horus8. Enjoy!
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:38 AM |
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Be thankful...at least I didn't get you old man river's collection...it was out of print...nobody bought it.
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