on guitar music and lies by w~* ATHENA *~w
25 Dec 2002, 12:51 AM
Hmmmmm...I gather our lolipop is a womanizer and a jiggalo...you sound angry...6
on the surrender by brazen
25 Dec 2002, 12:34 AM
If this is for me...thank you...I enjoyed it...maybe I'll let you taste me but then you'll get tooth decay..ayyyyy...here's some Mentadent.
on some deleted poem
24 Dec 2002, 9:20 PM
Here's a 7 to rest stops, twinkies, ass cracks, and a transvestite named Libby...enjoy!
on some deleted poem
25 Dec 2002, 1:09 AM
Richa..short for Richard I suppose...quite good...I enjoyed it tremendously. A perfect 10 in my book.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
Please don't show your true self if it's a reflection of your poetry...3
on Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Dec 2002, 9:10 PM
Lolipop you've outdone yourself..here's a 5 for you, Fellini and a porn-star midget named Bridgett......
on Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly
25 Dec 2002, 1:22 AM
You're 16 right? Your poetry is good, but try to diversify the areas in which you write. Ahhh...my apologies madam...it's good to know that our youth knows who Paul Anka is....I'm in my early 20s...ahhh, but I feel old, older at least.
on Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly
25 Dec 2002, 1:34 AM
It's around 4:30am in PA...you must be an insomniac like me...or maybe you can't sleep because Santa is bringing you lots of presents.....oooooh...open up the blue one..it's from me....ahhhh...a book of short poems by Horus8. Enjoy!
on Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly
25 Dec 2002, 1:38 AM
Be thankful...at least I didn't get you old man river's collection...it was out of print...nobody bought it.
on some deleted poem
24 Dec 2002, 7:11 PM
What more can you expect from a dope smoking, sandal wearing, frat boy...you have as much intelligence as my big toe nail....2
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 9:18 PM
Despite the negative comments, I actually quite like the poem. It looks like a poem that my college professor's assistant would write....have a 9
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 4:31 PM
I'm not DARK ANGEL you pretentious British fag. I must say your poem is funny yet you're not. Here's a lolipop...shove it up your ass...8
on First move by aliena
22 Dec 2002, 3:36 PM
for some odd reason I like the cheezy poem...but then again I love Celtic cheese...ahhhh....if you scratch my back I'll give you an oz.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 3:41 PM
I would change the last two lines...too many uses of "both"...other than that...quite good...9
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 4:14 PM
I think your love is my cousin, Ruby...a 280lbs sex phone operator. Give her a call 1900Lick
on corners by rockinindividual
24 Dec 2002, 7:34 PM
this is good...9
on Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly
25 Dec 2002, 1:05 AM
.....and they called it puppy love..oh I guess they'll never know (paul anka)....60s version of Timberlake....when you have to think about it then my sweet one...you're not in love....have an oreo...it will make you feel better....ahhhhh
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 9:37 PM
After listening to the Spice Girls and Take That no wonder you write shit like that....