| Re: My Hart by aNgElThAtLiVeS |
26-Mar-03/9:36 AM |
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If it were up to me, I'd have you hung by your own intestines and filled with irate fire ants for this poeme. Seriously, what about this is supposed to be a poem? It's just a bunch of obsessive cliches blocked into paragraphs and liberally seasoned with misspellings. Please go and kill yourself now.
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| Re: By the way... by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Mar-03/9:39 AM |
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Lame. Super lame. Poorly written, not a poem, bracingly awful treatment of the subject. This thing, not unlike most folks (yourself included) should have beeen aborted long ago.
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| Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Mar-03/9:41 AM |
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Nurse, fetch me the clearasil drip, stat! We're losing the patient!
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| Re: Disappear by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Mar-03/9:42 AM |
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That about sums it up, z.
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| Re: We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
26-Mar-03/9:45 AM |
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Yep. Tell me something that all the other schmucks aren't saying. Say it differently. repetitive.
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| Re: Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah |
1-Apr-03/10:32 AM |
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This poeme was the written equivalent of saltpeter. Dampened my libido for what may be several hours. Boo. In the meantime, lick this zero.
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| Re: fever by <~> |
1-Apr-03/10:35 AM |
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Pheromones and the peeling off of winter layers can create all sorts of interesting feelings...
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| Re: prettycock by kthulah |
2-Apr-03/5:46 AM |
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I dig seducing virgrins more. less wrinkled. wicked, though. Kthulah, you're my favourite colour out of space.
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| Re: Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217 |
2-Apr-03/5:53 AM |
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I think you're being controlled by the Bavarian Illuminati. Wrap your head in tinfoil and be sure not to leave air holes. The whole world is watching, dude!
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2-Apr-03/6:20 AM |
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P&K's right. Leave the poop to the professionals. Try writing about roman showers instead.
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| Re: Tell me I suck by Blindproject217 |
2-Apr-03/6:23 AM |
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| Re: Morman On A Bike by Blindproject217 |
4-Apr-03/6:55 AM |
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I had pet Mormons over the summer. They were adorable like Golden Retrievers. I taught them about Discordia and S&M. They left as better people.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Apr-03/11:49 AM |
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Piling on the Cheez Whiz, I see. Crap imagery, crap use of cliched wording. Who the hell untied you, took off the helmet, and let you down from the ceiling to write poemes, anyway?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Apr-03/11:51 AM |
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I'm agreeing with Ranger's theory.
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| Re: youth in asia by suckmychucks |
10-Apr-03/11:07 AM |
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Lame-ass goth schmuck. I should have guessed. Your eyeliner is crooked.
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| Re: bottoms up by suckmychucks |
10-Apr-03/11:08 AM |
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Shitty. Sounds like you just discovered booze. You're all "hee hee, look, I'm drinking BEER!" So lame.
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| Re: two flies by suckmychucks |
10-Apr-03/11:11 AM |
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The last line doen't scan. Instead, it irritates like the whiny voice of a zitty teenager. Which, if you think about it, makes sense.
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| Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins |
11-Apr-03/3:31 PM |
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That is fucking delightful! Not only a wonderful parody, but gets me right where I love exotic infectious diseases. plagues make me feel all funny inside. I will send a bevy of charming unifected strippers to your home in thanks.10
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| Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins |
11-Apr-03/3:32 PM |
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in other words, I love you.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Apr-03/3:34 PM |
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Dude, I thought Zzin was a chick. This conflicts with MY zzinnia fic. grr.
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