on Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith
9 Jun 2002, 2:21 PM
Wow, good point. Now that the Holy Knight of Faith has denounced my viewpoint, I've realised how wrong I was.
on Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82
9 Jun 2002, 2:19 PM
Given you seem to think this is good poetry, I think I have a much firmer grasp on reality than you.
on Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82
9 Jun 2002, 2:19 PM
And teenage or not, do you really think anyone cares who you screwed?
on Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82
9 Jun 2002, 2:18 PM
Hmmm... you know, I've never looked at it that way. Now that you've pointed out to me how mean and nasty I am, I'm going to turn over a new leaf.
on Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82
9 Jun 2002, 2:03 PM
Let me ask you a sincere question: do you honestly think that anyone at all wants to hear about your pathetic teenage fantasies? Just as I thought. Keep them to yourself.
on Whispers of the Night by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Jun 2002, 2:00 PM
As a matter of fact, I think he means that you're a dick.
on Untitled by Twisted Wizard
9 Jun 2002, 1:46 PM
I really wish you would quit. Please, please quit writing this crap.
on I Am by necroscope7
9 Jun 2002, 1:41 PM
I know what you are: a shockingly bad 'poet'.
on Succulent Fruit by Jody Conn
9 Jun 2002, 12:05 PM
Wow, you've written quite an original poem here - I haven't seen any of these phrases used in any of your others. Keep up the good work!!!
on Lachrymalia by Lain
9 Jun 2002, 11:57 AM
^ Yeah, good point!!! Using big words shows that we're more intelligent than other people!!!!!
on This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky
9 Jun 2002, 11:55 AM
Wow! You've really shocked me, by using lots of 'poetic' language, and then, in the middle, writing 'piss'!!! Great poem!!!!! - Keep up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!
on What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583
9 Jun 2002, 10:47 AM
Evidently being human involves writing awful poetry.
on Purgatory of Consciousness by crims0ngh0st
9 Jun 2002, 8:08 AM
maybe not.
on Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith
9 Jun 2002, 7:54 AM
I read two of Feist's books. They were as bad as your poetry.
on Hurting Heart by faded_twilight
8 Jun 2002, 2:05 PM
Yeah, you're right! Anyone who doesn't want you just doesn't appreciate how deep and sensitive you are. It's not that they find you ugly, stupid, irritating, self-absorbed, et cetera; it's that they don't understand you, because you have issues. Great poem!
on actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav
8 Jun 2002, 11:50 AM
I like the way you've built up to a triumphant exclamation about your chosen snack. Great Work!
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
8 Jun 2002, 10:53 AM
I was very, very close to rating this a ten. But then I realised it was the most appalling drivel I have ever seen written. Maybe if you could spell at least two words right I'd have given you a one, just out of sympathy.
on Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith
8 Jun 2002, 9:25 AM
raymond e feist sucks dick. david gemmell is at least twelve times better.