| Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith |
9-Jun-02/2:21 PM |
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Wow, good point. Now that the Holy Knight of Faith has denounced my viewpoint, I've realised how wrong I was.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:19 PM |
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Given you seem to think this is good poetry, I think I have a much firmer grasp on reality than you.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:19 PM |
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And teenage or not, do you really think anyone cares who you screwed?
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:18 PM |
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Hmmm... you know, I've never looked at it that way. Now that you've pointed out to me how mean and nasty I am, I'm going to turn over a new leaf.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:03 PM |
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Let me ask you a sincere question: do you honestly think that anyone at all wants to hear about your pathetic teenage fantasies? Just as I thought. Keep them to yourself.
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| Re: Whispers of the Night by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Jun-02/2:00 PM |
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As a matter of fact, I think he means that you're a dick.
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| Re: Icon by timfowler |
9-Jun-02/1:58 PM |
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This poem reminds me of the shit I took last week.
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| Re: Untitled by Twisted Wizard |
9-Jun-02/1:46 PM |
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I really wish you would quit. Please, please quit writing this crap.
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| Re: I Am by necroscope7 |
9-Jun-02/1:41 PM |
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I know what you are: a shockingly bad 'poet'.
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| Re: Succulent Fruit by Jody Conn |
9-Jun-02/12:05 PM |
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Wow, you've written quite an original poem here - I haven't seen any of these phrases used in any of your others. Keep up the good work!!!
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| Re: Lachrymalia by Lain |
9-Jun-02/11:57 AM |
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^ Yeah, good point!!! Using big words shows that we're more intelligent than other people!!!!!
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| Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky |
9-Jun-02/11:55 AM |
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Wow! You've really shocked me, by using lots of 'poetic' language, and then, in the middle, writing 'piss'!!! Great poem!!!!! - Keep up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583 |
9-Jun-02/10:47 AM |
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Evidently being human involves writing awful poetry.
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| Re: Purgatory of Consciousness by crims0ngh0st |
9-Jun-02/8:08 AM |
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| Re: fuck you by gsosville |
9-Jun-02/7:59 AM |
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You're so nasty. All we want is a place where we can express our emotions, and you have to turn it into a gutter-mouthed sewer.
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| Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith |
9-Jun-02/7:54 AM |
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I read two of Feist's books. They were as bad as your poetry.
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| Re: Hurting Heart by faded_twilight |
8-Jun-02/2:05 PM |
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Yeah, you're right! Anyone who doesn't want you just doesn't appreciate how deep and sensitive you are. It's not that they find you ugly, stupid, irritating, self-absorbed, et cetera; it's that they don't understand you, because you have issues. Great poem!
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| Re: actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav |
8-Jun-02/11:50 AM |
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I like the way you've built up to a triumphant exclamation about your chosen snack. Great Work!
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| Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying |
8-Jun-02/10:53 AM |
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I was very, very close to rating this a ten. But then I realised it was the most appalling drivel I have ever seen written. Maybe if you could spell at least two words right I'd have given you a one, just out of sympathy.
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| Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith |
8-Jun-02/9:25 AM |
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raymond e feist sucks dick. david gemmell is at least twelve times better.
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