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I Am (Free verse) by necroscope7 I am not
Who I appear to be
When I am someone else entirely
Or perhaps I am
Who I should be
When I'm not who I was
But certainly I am
Who no one else is
When I am merely myself
Up the ladder:
The Final Victor
Down the ladder:
FAILED PRAYER
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Posted: June 6, 2002 7:47 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2002 7:47 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7272725 Overall Rank: 11847 Comments:
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beakism @ 213.123.43.19
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9-Jun-02/1:41 PM
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I know what you are: a shockingly bad 'poet'.
When half a bee, is not a bee, due to some ancient injury. Singing: A LA DEE DUM A LA DEE DEE, ERIC THE HALF A BEE
Not a good poem. Tells all, shows nothing.
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