| Re: a comment on The Writing Life by poetandknowit |
11-Sep-02/9:42 AM |
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Now who's commenting at the same time as other people? Go on. Tell me.
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| Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit |
11-Sep-02/9:30 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
11-Sep-02/9:03 AM |
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Sorry!!!!!!! Won't happen again !!!!!$$$muchogas$$$
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| Re: a comment on Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
11-Sep-02/9:02 AM |
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No he won't. Because even when he does get the leotard, some twat will turn up wearing an all-in-one of speed + 3, racing as a novice even though he's won three races this season, and kick his ass.
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| Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
11-Sep-02/8:59 AM |
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The language seems a little too pretty for Putney; but that doesn't take away too much.
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| Re: Leaf on the wind by troll454 |
10-Sep-02/2:03 PM |
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Besides the obvious, rather unremarkable final two lines, I don't see that this poem has anything to recommend it. Presumably the high votes are due to its emotional subject, but banal writing cannot stand up on its subject matter.
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| Re: Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
8-Sep-02/3:24 PM |
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I don't believe there are so many negative votes on this. It couldn't possibly offend the sensitive sensibilities of a teenage girl.
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| Re: a comment on Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism |
8-Sep-02/4:45 AM |
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At your nearest Bums R Us.
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| Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii |
8-Sep-02/4:41 AM |
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Look, I have to side with Dark_Angel on this one. There's a fine line between kidding around and being downright insulting, and you haven't quite got the balance right. Better luck Next Time!
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| Re: The heart of self destruction by Roisin |
8-Sep-02/3:56 AM |
line five, I think what you actually mean is 'as we lie'.
lie (lying; lay; lain) : to be or to stay at rest in a horizontal position; rest, recline...
lay (laid) : to put or set down.
speak is in the present tense, so apparently you and your friend are laying eggs while you speak tenderly.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by beakism |
7-Sep-02/3:39 PM |
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come on, deidre, write a poem. I want to write long, abusive comments. I want to vote zero. I want to write poems about how ugly and talentless you are. so hurry up.
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| Re: Water Droplet by craiggiarc1971 |
7-Sep-02/3:37 PM |
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Aha! I understand the poem! All the pairs of words are related - EXCEPT SKIN AND CUSTARD!!!!11 - we are being forced to reconsider whether we are not, after all, cannibals.
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| Re: Water Droplet by craiggiarc1971 |
7-Sep-02/3:11 PM |
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Wow! Maybe now you can move onto 'Hop On Pop'!
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
7-Sep-02/3:10 PM |
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
7-Sep-02/3:05 PM |
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and I'm curious - what part did I play in this mystery?
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
7-Sep-02/3:04 PM |
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you mean he has multiple voting level three? I couldn't find the Form of Extra Joining required to get the upgrade.
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| Re: Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism |
7-Sep-02/3:01 PM |
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I think that that should be up to the reader - it could be the nail I drove through your hand, or the rocket I'm going to fire at your house, or the penis growing from your forehead where you used to have hair. I think the interpretation the reader chooses will reveal something about their subconscious.
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
7-Sep-02/2:59 PM |
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PAKI, I think poemranker has gotten to you. You're throwing around accusations of multiple identities like... I don't know... but all I can say is, beakism didn't do it on poemranker with another username. Maybe it was Colonel Bustard.
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| Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness |
7-Sep-02/2:49 PM |
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there's a gay pub down the road, you know.
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| Re: Hypocrites by PawnedTidal |
5-Sep-02/3:06 PM |
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Indeed. If the poem flowed better, and if it wasn't a rant against parents, I'd enjoy it.
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