| Re: Succulent Fruit by Jody Conn |
9-Jun-02/12:05 PM |
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Wow, you've written quite an original poem here - I haven't seen any of these phrases used in any of your others. Keep up the good work!!!
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9-Jun-02/1:28 PM |
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I also think this poem would be improved by being completely different.
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| Re: I Am by necroscope7 |
9-Jun-02/1:41 PM |
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I know what you are: a shockingly bad 'poet'.
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| Re: Untitled by Twisted Wizard |
9-Jun-02/1:46 PM |
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I really wish you would quit. Please, please quit writing this crap.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Jun-02/1:49 PM |
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No, this isn't a poem. You see, what you've done (again) is taken a piece of prose and split the sentences into lines. Doing that doesn't make the writing more poignant; it just makes you look like a tit.
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| Re: Icon by timfowler |
9-Jun-02/1:58 PM |
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This poem reminds me of the shit I took last week.
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| Re: Whispers of the Night by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Jun-02/2:00 PM |
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As a matter of fact, I think he means that you're a dick.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:03 PM |
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Let me ask you a sincere question: do you honestly think that anyone at all wants to hear about your pathetic teenage fantasies? Just as I thought. Keep them to yourself.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:18 PM |
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Hmmm... you know, I've never looked at it that way. Now that you've pointed out to me how mean and nasty I am, I'm going to turn over a new leaf.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:19 PM |
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And teenage or not, do you really think anyone cares who you screwed?
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:19 PM |
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Given you seem to think this is good poetry, I think I have a much firmer grasp on reality than you.
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| Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith |
9-Jun-02/2:21 PM |
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Wow, good point. Now that the Holy Knight of Faith has denounced my viewpoint, I've realised how wrong I was.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:23 PM |
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If you don't claim to be a poet, don't criticize my poetry. I think the antics of a Cad are far more important than whatever you think happened between you and a man.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:27 PM |
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Look, I don't care about your feelings on life, I just want to know why you think anyone would care about who you screwed!
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| Re: The Haiku by beakism |
9-Jun-02/2:29 PM |
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| Re: The Cad by beakism |
9-Jun-02/2:31 PM |
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What do you mean? Do you think every poem has to have a message? It's just a fucking poem about a crafty Cad.
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:34 PM |
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I'm not criticizing her god damn feelings. I'm wondering why anyone would give a shit about who she screwed.
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| Re: Painty by wlshepherd |
10-Jun-02/3:43 AM |
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Wow! Great Job! I like the way you've chosen a selection of actions a man might take, and described them as painted! Keep up the Good Work!!!
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| Re: wizard master by beakism |
10-Jun-02/3:46 AM |
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Halt! I, Quaerion, Lord of the Dark Elves, Protector of the Realm of Night, can see through any Orckish disguise! I see your true form, Orc!
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| Re: The Cad by beakism |
10-Jun-02/7:41 AM |
Ah, you just have to squish a couple long words into one syllable each, and it works fine.
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