Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583	7-Jun-02/2:41 PM
my god, this is the worst, absolute worst BS I have ever seen in my life
Re: stupid by mogwai	7-Jun-02/2:48 PM
you're pretty stupid, aren't you?
Re: Deadly Rape by HolyKnightOfFaith	8-Jun-02/9:23 AM
yeah, I like the way you've thwarted the reader's expectations by taking a traditionally subtle and suggestive form and producing a blunt, harsh image.
Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith	8-Jun-02/9:25 AM
raymond e feist sucks dick. david gemmell is at least twelve times better.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jun-02/9:28 AM
I bet you're going to take this to a poetry reading, and read it with "emotion" and think you've really got into the feel of it with body movements and different voice tones, and everyone's going to clap because they'll be so embarrassed for you.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jun-02/9:30 AM
yes, I also have a children's encyclopedia
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jun-02/10:39 AM
What do you mean by "I've gotten quite good at it"? This is the worst 'haiku' I've ever read. No, that's wrong, because this isn't even a haiku. This is the worst poem I have ever seen in my entire life. Dark Angel is at least twelve times better.
Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying	8-Jun-02/10:53 AM
I was very, very close to rating this a ten. But then I realised it was the most appalling drivel I have ever seen written. Maybe if you could spell at least two words right I'd have given you a one, just out of sympathy.
Re: actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav	8-Jun-02/11:50 AM
I like the way you've built up to a triumphant exclamation about your chosen snack. Great Work!
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jun-02/12:51 PM
It's not a surprise she's left you with poetry this poor.
Re: Hurting Heart by faded_twilight	8-Jun-02/2:05 PM
Yeah, you're right! Anyone who doesn't want you just doesn't appreciate how deep and sensitive you are. It's not that they find you ugly, stupid, irritating, self-absorbed, et cetera; it's that they don't understand you, because you have issues. Great poem!
Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith	9-Jun-02/7:54 AM
I read two of Feist's books. They were as bad as your poetry.
Re: fuck you by gsosville	9-Jun-02/7:59 AM
You're so nasty. All we want is a place where we can express our emotions, and you have to turn it into a gutter-mouthed sewer.
Re: Purgatory of Consciousness by crims0ngh0st	9-Jun-02/8:08 AM
maybe not.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jun-02/8:14 AM
You know, I might believe you had a knack (note the correct spelling) for writing if a single poem of yours had a rating above five. But they don't, so I don't.
Re: What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583	9-Jun-02/10:47 AM
Evidently being human involves writing awful poetry.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jun-02/11:49 AM
Wow! I really like the way you've taken a piece of prose, and separated each sentence into several lines, and called it a poem! - very clever!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!
Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky	9-Jun-02/11:55 AM
Wow! You've really shocked me, by using lots of 'poetic' language, and then, in the middle, writing 'piss'!!! Great poem!!!!! - Keep up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!
Re: Lachrymalia by Lain	9-Jun-02/11:57 AM
^ Yeah, good point!!! Using big words shows that we're more intelligent than other people!!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jun-02/12:04 PM
You've created a really mysterious effect by removing most of the words from your sentences and putting them in jumbled orders - very clever!!!