regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/7:34 PM
I would rather watch a whole cow deep fry than read this again.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/7:34 PM
I would rather watch a whole cow deep fry than read this again.
Re: I will love you forever by savannah	22-Nov-02/7:44 PM
Do you know what Free verse is? And I will love to hate this poem forever, with all my heart. cliche You should really write for Hallmark.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/7:46 PM
Interesting, "seems to me like only a part of a poem"
Re: Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird	22-Nov-02/7:48 PM
Funny.
Re: I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird	22-Nov-02/7:52 PM
I like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Dec-02/6:02 PM
I know not what to say, This poem is amazingly gay spiff of off punk rock sentimental CRAP out of an old sock.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	25-Dec-02/6:57 PM
I liked the gist of this poem, but the meataphors you decided to use hold no particular meaning in literature or even logically. " Crocodiles drown in synchronized sorrow," I really thought of this particualr verse as, well stupid. Don't be offeneded, as I said like the theme behind this poem and thought it better than many of the others I have read. I'm only trying to help you out. It would be alot better if you added symbolism that made sense. for instance, a candle is usally related to life, a hawk is reffered to as the soul.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Dec-02/7:09 PM
First of all, you only use "an" before "A, E, I, O, U". Second of all, posting this crap and calling it poetry, insults all poets and poems. When you learn how to properly use grammer and write something worth reading, feel free to write then. Caducas, you are also an Idot who should jump ou the window and end all of our sufferings. Calling Crap, fine piece of work.
Re: The canary's last song by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Dec-02/6:47 PM
"melody in a cage", I like the metaphor. Do You like Robert Frost?
Re: Gone by Katie2	28-Dec-02/6:49 PM
Interesting. It would be better if you used more imagery and weren't so blunt about it.
Re: Maria by Nicholas Monson	28-Dec-02/7:09 PM
Very NIce, "Whom is the correct grammar", don't worry. I also feel that" Then I first espied her. She had beauty to excess! A laugh to shiver spines - A Galician princess. What mystic Yorkshire root Was stirred in quiemada? What supernatural spice Was robbed from heaven's larder?" is very descriptive in imagery.
Re: Track.... by Topaz Servias	6-Jan-03/7:52 PM
I have seen the murky line On which your soul will twine Sandwhich is what you wanted right? Dirty room like the twilight.
Re: When I wake... by Topaz Servias	6-Jan-03/7:54 PM
Intersting, I wonder whom you are talking about. man-with-pants
Re: The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	13-Jan-03/8:28 PM
WOW. Have a nice day. 0
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	13-Jan-03/8:30 PM
It's good, but get the emotions organized and not so vague. 7
Re: Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer	13-Jan-03/8:35 PM
What a sorry piece of crap. Take care.