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I will love you forever (Free verse) by savannah
I love you so deeply, I love you so much, I love the sound of your voice And the way that we touch. I love your warm smile And your kind, thoughtful way, The joy that you bring To my life every day. I love you today As I have from the start, And I'll love you forever With all of my heart.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.3
Overall Rank: 3686
Posted: November 22, 2002 3:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2002 3:21 PM PST
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[0] smlink84 @ 66.82.9.24 | 22-Nov-02/7:44 PM | Reply
Do you know what Free verse is?
And I will love to hate this poem forever, with all my heart. cliche
You should really write for Hallmark.
[n/a] debased @ 24.43.45.89 | 23-Nov-02/11:30 AM | Reply
its sweet
sounds like a card
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[10] ciantu @ 216.128.137.167 | 23-Nov-02/4:20 PM | Reply
thats sweet
[6] T'ien @ 217.36.202.68 | 23-Nov-02/5:37 PM | Reply
basic but effective
[6] T'ien @ 217.36.202.68 > T'ien | 23-Nov-02/5:37 PM | Reply
smlink don u mean oxymoron i aint heard that cliche b4
[8] LovingWhispers @ 211.26.146.127 | 26-Nov-02/10:42 PM | Reply
Beautiful...Simply Beautiful!!!
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