Re: The bouchon by Bachus |
7-Jan-03/1:02 AM |
Ho ho hum ho heh.
8 for the laugh.
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Re: My buttocks are on fire. by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/1:05 AM |
This one's for you, Bobjim.
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Re: It Is About by Wulf |
7-Jan-03/1:10 AM |
This is very nice, it really got to me...beautiful and sad, very sweet. 9
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/1:14 AM |
Very good indeed-y. I get the feeling from this that it's more song material than pure poetry, but hey, who cares! This is tres bien. 9
Also, does anyone here listen to Ozric Tentacles? They're brilliant-the only instrumental group to inspire me lyrically...now I'm going off at a tangent, beg your pardon everybody.
Still a great poem on second read!
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/1:16 AM |
Aha, the incredibly unsurprising bout of anonymous zeros.
Is Settle still with us in spirit?
Will change my vote to a ten to compensate a little.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/1:39 AM |
Nice one, like it a lot! 8
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Re: The poet by Mikius |
7-Jan-03/1:44 AM |
Nice, perhaps the bit where "something happens" could be emphasised a bit more straight away. Or maybe it's better as it is. I like it. 8
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Re: Morning on Galapados by Mikius |
7-Jan-03/1:46 AM |
2nd to last verse is excellent, I like it a great deal.
Not sure about the last line, if I can think of anything better for it I'll let you know.
Only other gripe is that 'fresh' doesn't have an 'a'.
Good work
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Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/1:47 AM |
Is that to me?
Should I give him a 5? Ok.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/1:48 AM |
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Re: Compassion by Kashi |
7-Jan-03/1:51 AM |
A shitload of anonymous votes!
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Re: inside me by cherish |
7-Jan-03/1:52 AM |
Not bad. Hits hard for a three-liner.
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Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~> |
7-Jan-03/2:06 AM |
This is nice. However, I still can't see the difference between free verse and prose with extra spaces. Will somebody please enlighten me?!?
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/2:09 AM |
Precisely.
Does 'fire' have one syllable or two? Fy-yur or Fire?
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Re: Shark by cleverdevice |
7-Jan-03/5:09 AM |
Hur hur hur
*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/5:12 AM |
Precisely.
Who 8 sumtotal pi?
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Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan |
7-Jan-03/5:13 AM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Jan-03/5:22 AM |
Settle, we adore thee, etc etc
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regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jan-03/12:47 AM |
SETTLE! YOU'RE BACK!
(what about your back?)
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Re: The French Shark by -=SeTTle=- |
8-Jan-03/12:50 AM |
Hur hur hee hee. What a fabulous picture...mon dick...mon dieu...heh heh...have a 9 for making me laugh.
This isn't by any chance related to cleverdevice's shark, now, is it?
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