Comments byCaducus, 921–940 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 8:13 AM
Its good, but your title is pompous, mutual respect of poetry/haiku's whether their a masterpiece or not should be displayed.
I await your backlash
on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 8:31 AM
Ban Coffee !
on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird 22 Nov 2002, 8:33 AM
at least it wasn't a sock
on Come Night time by anitawit 22 Nov 2002, 8:59 AM
You seem to have been inspired and it shows, I was wondering if the little pinpoints of light were the eyes of a dormouse about to be slaughtered in the matrix?
on The Advent Of Monsoon by anitawit 22 Nov 2002, 9:02 AM
This is really good but its very similar to 'Come Nightime' I think you should remove one and enter one of them later, different beasts with the same growl.
on Beginning or End? by xdarkxangelx24 22 Nov 2002, 9:06 AM
I think its the end !
For your keyboard that is, for Xmas I will buy you an enter button
and a spring
on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 9:17 AM
This has made me think for some reason of those creepy porcelain dolls with glass oval eyes.
Explain Tintageles the shadow of her porcelain heart theirs so many theories going on about that line in my head but i havent been able to connect them yet?
on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 9:36 AM
This is up there with 'Holmganga', and reading your work is a requiem of literary pleasure, you are truly talented and you should take your work further.
O.B. Wan has taught you well.

I didnt know Diana was latin for moon, and Endymion was a beautiful young man loved by the moon. so I guess a title for your poem could be Endymions lover or 'Interlunium' (change of moon)
Anyway 10/10 most of your poems blow me away.
on The Smurf Village by Bachus 23 Nov 2002, 2:02 AM
This is the important one, the sinister paradise of the smurfs, its about to kick off - bigtime in smurfopia
on some deleted poem 23 Nov 2002, 2:05 AM
I think obliterated, or decimated are harder words for a tradgedy.
on some deleted poem 23 Nov 2002, 4:46 AM
Father not Farther and I find the ending totally incomprehensible.

Whats the message in this ?
on some deleted poem 23 Nov 2002, 5:08 AM
Everytime I piss myself laughing at your put downs, but they are addictive and like a trappist monk secretly palming his cock i must give myself 100 lashes of punishment for these taboo pleasures that you share with us. This is fetishistic scorn, and as like a panto villain people love to hate you because you wear your ego like a Milliners panama.

In short I embrace this as a fine fine work.
on some deleted poem 23 Nov 2002, 5:14 AM
0207 389 2233 call this number their the best in the land.

I have named a laughter line after you, you crease me up (literally)
on some deleted poem 23 Nov 2002, 5:17 AM
Dammit man ! thats where my magic wand is

HAAAAArrrrrryyyyy
on My world Of Emptiness by abbaslittleclingon 25 Nov 2002, 1:15 AM
not bad, 1st line definitely doesnt sound right, check the grammar ok?
on Are We Losing Those Things We Hold Dear by abbaslittleclingon 25 Nov 2002, 1:17 AM
You could have carried this on to hit home your message harder. however I liked it, some nice phrases a.l.c
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 1:19 AM
The 2nd stanza is very good, ment is mis spelled.
oved the line about the hiding smile it hit me.
on Wave to the starving children Miss Denmark. by horus8 25 Nov 2002, 1:38 AM
last line says it all !
on Small Town Snow by OneFingerAnswer 25 Nov 2002, 1:42 AM
Some of this was like a drive through Twin Peaks.

A Damn fine cherry pie ma'm -7-
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 8:39 AM
I miss Arnie too, if he read this we'd be missing you.
I would terminate this poem, you know you can do better.