| Re: Battle of the brains by INTRANSIT |
14-Oct-03/3:29 PM |
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Wow shorter than a haiku and speaking as loud with less - impressed - maybe we could have a new category called >>>>>>>>> Shorts 8
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| Re: Turncoat by poetandknowit |
14-Oct-03/3:31 PM |
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Please explain the last 2 lines.
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14-Oct-03/3:33 PM |
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Are you feeling okay? I only found the use of anus once
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| Re: An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8 |
15-Oct-03/1:33 AM |
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I have seen these bastards in the cinema and felt like sliting there throats with the stale popcorn they sell. On my last visit to the Odeon I heard someone groaning and told them to shut the fuck up, on my exit i realized the person i shouted at was in a wheelchair - still fair treatment to all lol.
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15-Oct-03/9:47 AM |
God i love this like grannys gravy -9-
Never knew someone could jar ya
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| Re: falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa |
24-Oct-03/6:40 AM |
poemranker support : 9
You're a leader richard
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| Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit |
25-Oct-03/3:45 AM |
My thoughts are more like drop and splash.
I cracked up when i saw it because for a moment i thought it would be your life story.
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| Re: Nothing beat the 90's for An over view of American culture by Shardik |
25-Oct-03/3:46 AM |
blue collar beaten. 1st half was real ass kicker.
please help me with syllable's h ! and read my haiku just posted. i have the ideas but understand women more than syllables.
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| Re: Tiddles Breathes his Last by scitz |
29-Oct-03/9:24 AM |
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6-Nov-03/7:00 AM |
a poem that really brings to life the poem and shouts its point across from start to crescendo.
i liked it and its the best you've written in my opinion 9
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| Re: God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Nov-03/7:01 AM |
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| Re: God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Nov-03/7:02 AM |
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put a dash between k and mart for the english - we just think kmart is NYC street slang otherwise.
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| Re: Fathers by amielou82 |
6-Nov-03/7:05 AM |
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just when i started liking it i hated the next line and so on and so on- bit too preachy and a warm earl grey.
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| Re: The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 |
6-Nov-03/7:09 AM |
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full marks fo rthe use of gobbledygook
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| Re: The Thrapper by You are a fat fucker |
6-Nov-03/7:10 AM |
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6-Nov-03/7:11 AM |
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not bad but how the hell can you hold on to a scar? a scar is embedded
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6-Nov-03/7:15 AM |
Don't get some of it but line 5 mesmerized me.
fealty is an interesting word choice.
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6-Nov-03/7:20 AM |
true as any touch? that makes me think about how true we really are, especially considering recent events in my life.
Is every touch really true?
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| Re: Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT |
11-Nov-03/4:01 PM |
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| Re: Boxes by INTRANSIT |
19-Nov-03/4:18 AM |
try damien hurst and you'll make yourself blled from scratching.
very true point.
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