| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
8-Nov-02/8:36 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Nov-02/2:02 PM |
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..which leads to what conclusion? It just leaves you....?? Poems are emotive, this one is not.
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| Re: Reflection by Judas kiss |
15-Nov-03/1:06 AM |
Nice. Sad.
I love the last verse. What is a doppelganger?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Nov-03/1:10 AM |
Is the heart worth loving? Is the soul worthy of being missed? Are you talking about yourself?
Maybe its better off in the dark.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Nov-03/1:23 AM |
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Amazing. scary/possessive?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Nov-03/3:39 AM |
It sounds like your contridicting yourself.
Silence cupped in your palm? LIke a grail of fresh water?
You are ultimately the Creator?
It sounds good and is emotive, althought the meaning is masked.
Puzzling.
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| Re: Good Riddance by dragonfly |
15-Nov-03/3:43 AM |
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Disconcerting? Did you mean disconcerning?
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| Re: Avalanche by dragonfly |
15-Nov-03/3:47 AM |
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I like it but isn't avalanche too messy/dusty/destructive?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Nov-03/6:57 PM |
Courageous effort. Well done! I congradulate you and I hope you enjoy your self-pity(ful) state. I won't play Good Samaritian with you cause he wouldn't give a second glance...you yourself said.
Let those red tears keep streaking down, maybe what you need is purification. And I didn't know society had such a appetite for losers. And yes, please learn to spell! (For your sake!)
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| Re: Preacher Man by masticatedmess |
15-Nov-03/7:07 PM |
Man, your horrible.
The last line doesn't go.
What is it with you and masticated?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Nov-03/5:44 PM |
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Death is the ultimate orgasm. It's graduating on to the next level. Why are you glorifying it in this marydor-dom way? Why is your world so small?
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| Re: Jerry and Jack by eyrbare |
17-Nov-03/5:46 PM |
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| Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii |
20-Nov-03/4:30 AM |
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What doesn't break you makes you stronger.
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| Re: What I know of monsters by Bachus |
20-Nov-03/4:33 AM |
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| Re: looking for him by Freethinker1602 |
20-Nov-03/4:36 AM |
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| Re: You Left Your Brownies by Freethinker1602 |
20-Nov-03/4:38 AM |
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What's with the brownies?
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| Re: You're Good by Freethinker1602 |
20-Nov-03/4:41 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Nov-03/4:43 AM |
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| Re: The Rift by Bachus |
20-Nov-03/4:49 AM |
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Like very much. Do you know who Bachus is?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
29-Jul-04/7:19 PM |
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I can relate. I'm a stripper. Bittersweet.
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