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Avalanche (Free verse) by dragonfly
Time treaded soft as cotton
during those autumn nights
when he and I would sink
under the currents
rarely coming back up for air
And all my defenses tumbled down
like an avalanche
burying all my animosity
as I would wake at his side
Autumn took me under its wing
and I wore it like a smile on my face
I became aware right then and there
for what misfortune sows
his simple touch would repair
And all my defenses tumble down
like an avalanche
burying all my resentment
as I'm waking at his side
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.666667
Weighted score: 6.8333335
Overall Rank: 341
Posted: October 18, 2003 11:16 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2003 11:16 PM PDT
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