on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 2:02 PM
..which leads to what conclusion? It just leaves you....?? Poems are emotive, this one is not.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Nov 2002, 8:36 PM
what the hell?
on Reflection by Judas kiss
15 Nov 2003, 1:06 AM
Nice. Sad.
I love the last verse. What is a doppelganger?
I love the last verse. What is a doppelganger?
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2003, 1:10 AM
Is the heart worth loving? Is the soul worthy of being missed? Are you talking about yourself?
Maybe its better off in the dark.
Maybe its better off in the dark.
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2003, 1:23 AM
Amazing. scary/possessive?
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2003, 3:39 AM
It sounds like your contridicting yourself.
Silence cupped in your palm? LIke a grail of fresh water?
You are ultimately the Creator?
It sounds good and is emotive, althought the meaning is masked.
Puzzling.
Silence cupped in your palm? LIke a grail of fresh water?
You are ultimately the Creator?
It sounds good and is emotive, althought the meaning is masked.
Puzzling.
on Good Riddance by dragonfly
15 Nov 2003, 3:43 AM
Disconcerting? Did you mean disconcerning?
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2003, 6:57 PM
Courageous effort. Well done! I congradulate you and I hope you enjoy your self-pity(ful) state. I won't play Good Samaritian with you cause he wouldn't give a second glance...you yourself said.
Let those red tears keep streaking down, maybe what you need is purification. And I didn't know society had such a appetite for losers. And yes, please learn to spell! (For your sake!)
Let those red tears keep streaking down, maybe what you need is purification. And I didn't know society had such a appetite for losers. And yes, please learn to spell! (For your sake!)
on Preacher Man by masticatedmess
15 Nov 2003, 7:07 PM
Man, your horrible.
The last line doesn't go.
What is it with you and masticated?
The last line doesn't go.
What is it with you and masticated?
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2003, 5:44 PM
Death is the ultimate orgasm. It's graduating on to the next level. Why are you glorifying it in this marydor-dom way? Why is your world so small?
on Jerry and Jack by eyrbare
17 Nov 2003, 5:46 PM
Funny.
on Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii
20 Nov 2003, 4:30 AM
What doesn't break you makes you stronger.
on What I know of monsters by Bachus
20 Nov 2003, 4:33 AM
Scary.
on looking for him by Freethinker1602
20 Nov 2003, 4:36 AM
quantity..10 quality...4
on You Left Your Brownies by Freethinker1602
20 Nov 2003, 4:38 AM
What's with the brownies?
on You're Good by Freethinker1602
20 Nov 2003, 4:41 AM
Stalker?
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2003, 4:43 AM
wow, vivid.
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2004, 7:19 PM
I can relate. I'm a stripper. Bittersweet.