regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jul-04/8:19 AM
Who's TISA?
Re: Mors Omnia Solvit by shit	30-Jul-04/8:29 AM
Permanent solution to temporary situation. May I have your shotgun when you're finished, Kurt?
Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	31-Jul-04/9:12 AM
A Ranticle about god is angst that aggravates misunderstanding. Just remember the sentence. "What Would Jesus Do?" Keep in mind "We're all dying (some faster than others)." Ah there's the peace we seek. -9-
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jul-04/3:19 PM
How dare you! "I am the Sad Bastard" not you. Nice subtle rant. -10-
Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	31-Jul-04/3:27 PM
The misspellings and lack of punctuation may be a "style" or a "voice" the writer is trying to convey. I need more input before I judge the poet's spelling and grammar level. -5-
Re: Barflies and Bombshells by wilco	31-Jul-04/5:13 PM
A second kiss? Not one last roll in the hay? You get the -9- points because you didn't ask for a -69- before the bombshell drops her drawers.
Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom	31-Jul-04/5:31 PM
Haiku- 17 syllables, three lines, 5-7-5. Even though "You can not kill a dead man and I am not a- fraid to die, Buddy" has the right syllable count, it doesn't stay true to form. I hate forms. But I like a good line to say when I'm drunk at a bar and some other poet is calling me out(to fight, not to dance). Come to think about it, it works for either happenstance.-5-
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jul-04/5:45 PM
Ah the delicious Surf and Turf "rump roast&fish." A meal fit for a king. Here, King. Smell the farts and eat the poet. Yummy! -9-
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Aug-04/7:09 AM
Who are you and what have you done with Shuushin? In general, song lyrics are silly. Don't worry be happy. And I walk with him and I talk with him...O'er the ramparts we watched...Is that all there is? I've got friends in low places...smells like teen deoderant... If the aforementioned are hit lyrics then yours is at least a -9-.
Re: Consolation by Dovina	1-Aug-04/9:44 PM
Shoot 'im.
Re: Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}>	2-Aug-04/8:08 AM
A modern kind of "I sing the Body Electric." I like it.
Re: two by unknown^user	2-Aug-04/8:11 AM
Wow. Best phrase-"propheteering ministers."
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	3-Aug-04/7:20 PM
"Spoofing of other users is not permitted." This is not a spoof. A spoof would be written in the style of ___________(insert poet). This poem is not written in the style of Dovina. It is written in the style of >not Dovina<. Therefore it is just a freaky, jerky elementary school rhyme. It should take its place next to "fat, fat the water rat," "I see Paris. I see France. I see someone's underpants" and so many others in that genre. -5- for showing up and posting.
Re: Sugared Giraffes by Venus	4-Aug-04/7:54 AM
Curiously evocative.
Re: Brats by D. $ Fontera	4-Aug-04/7:55 AM
Nice re-write.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Aug-04/7:58 AM
Next, one on west nile? Good as limiricks go. A perfect DA tribute.-8-
Re: Marina by INTRANSIT	4-Aug-04/11:54 PM
i think the masts are waiting and the fog is brushing. "Tall, waiting masts?" or is the fog waiting and brushing? Great images.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-04/12:04 AM
Alfred Molina and you, too? Probably one of the few good poems to result from "Coffee and Cigarettes."
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-04/8:56 AM
Yep.
Re: Concussion + Broken Hearts= bad week by New Life Drug	6-Aug-04/8:05 AM
Imagine how bad it would have been Without the Vicodin!