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red hot, like a paddled rump! very nice. "or that coiling." interesting choice.
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| Re: Hated by Ninoy_Instigator |
24-Oct-02/9:38 AM |
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believe me, you'll get over it.
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24-Oct-02/9:40 AM |
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truly bizarre. the australian cliches roll out so fast it's hard to keep up with them. if you're really australia, i'd be shocked.
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24-Oct-02/9:44 AM |
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class today..." strangely effective, while derivative.
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| Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8 |
24-Oct-02/9:46 AM |
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nice and short. also surprising from you. a little sentimental. not sure you can have orphans in a poem unless they are being thrown from a bridge.
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4-Nov-02/8:26 AM |
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good lord. what's next, ode to harry dean stanton?
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| Re: bad boy taylor by rosiebailey |
4-Nov-02/8:30 AM |
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my personal favourite instance of the bastardization of the language: "coz es da man." like "Bad Leroy Brown" written by a crackhead.
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4-Nov-02/8:32 AM |
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what the hell is this, "Rapranker"?
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| Re: HATE by Blade |
4-Nov-02/8:34 AM |
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yet another splendid entry from Blade (featuring Kris Kristofferson). do you every submit anything you don't think to yourself while looking out the window of your cell?
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| Re: Is it you by Katie |
4-Nov-02/8:42 AM |
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aren't you a little young to be held in the arms of a man? naughty, naughty! keep it up. 7
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4-Nov-02/8:43 AM |
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4-Nov-02/8:46 AM |
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wait a second! i thought "bad boy taylor" was the man! sounds like trouble's brewing in the 'hood! somebody's gonna pop a cap before long! hopefully your computer will get struck by the ricochet.
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| Re: maggie da thatcher by rosiebailey |
4-Nov-02/8:48 AM |
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you're fucking kidding me, right? is this serious? "dat is fat"! not exactly the most original note to go out on either.
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| Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird |
4-Nov-02/8:49 AM |
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awful. stupid. juvenile. lechter wouldn't be proud because he's an intellectual and you, well...
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4-Nov-02/8:56 AM |
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isn't it "be-yatch!"? i think it flows a little better. and i should know. is this pro or con (excuse the pun) for the gangsta life? the YEH! at the end would confuse me if i cared at all.
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4-Nov-02/10:48 AM |
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4-Nov-02/10:54 AM |
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worthless. pathetic. asinine.
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5-Nov-02/6:35 AM |
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how many times are you going to write this poem?
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5-Nov-02/6:36 AM |
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oh, god. will this ever end?
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| Re: Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8 |
5-Nov-02/6:49 AM |
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what happened to old Gay Angel, anyhow? he hasn't been around. and i thought he said one time that he lived in Indiana.
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