on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 10:48 AM
"ma bwudda"? come on!
on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 6:49 AM
what happened to old Gay Angel, anyhow? he hasn't been around. and i thought he said one time that he lived in Indiana.
on some deleted poem
5 Nov 2002, 6:35 AM
how many times are you going to write this poem?
on some deleted poem
5 Nov 2002, 6:36 AM
oh, god. will this ever end?
on bad boy taylor by rosiebailey
4 Nov 2002, 8:30 AM
my personal favourite instance of the bastardization of the language: "coz es da man." like "Bad Leroy Brown" written by a crackhead.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 8:32 AM
what the hell is this, "Rapranker"?
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 8:43 AM
terrible.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 8:46 AM
wait a second! i thought "bad boy taylor" was the man! sounds like trouble's brewing in the 'hood! somebody's gonna pop a cap before long! hopefully your computer will get struck by the ricochet.
on maggie da thatcher by rosiebailey
4 Nov 2002, 8:48 AM
you're fucking kidding me, right? is this serious? "dat is fat"! not exactly the most original note to go out on either.
on Got Balls? by Yardbird
4 Nov 2002, 8:49 AM
awful. stupid. juvenile. lechter wouldn't be proud because he's an intellectual and you, well...
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 8:56 AM
isn't it "be-yatch!"? i think it flows a little better. and i should know. is this pro or con (excuse the pun) for the gangsta life? the YEH! at the end would confuse me if i cared at all.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 10:54 AM
worthless. pathetic. asinine.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8
24 Oct 2002, 9:46 AM
nice and short. also surprising from you. a little sentimental. not sure you can have orphans in a poem unless they are being thrown from a bridge.
on Hated by Ninoy_Instigator
24 Oct 2002, 9:38 AM
believe me, you'll get over it.
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2002, 9:40 AM
truly bizarre. the australian cliches roll out so fast it's hard to keep up with them. if you're really australia, i'd be shocked.
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2002, 9:44 AM
"jeremy spoke in
class today..." strangely effective, while derivative.
class today..." strangely effective, while derivative.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:40 AM
red hot, like a paddled rump! very nice. "or that coiling." interesting choice.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 8:26 AM
good lord. what's next, ode to harry dean stanton?