Re: Lysander cried by bornagainpoet	3-Jan-03/8:55 PM
true
Re: I Think by PawnedTidal	3-Jan-03/8:53 PM
been there, know it, feel it...it works quite well. like your style. To the point and honest. Passionate yet simple. Very good.
Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof	3-Jan-03/8:52 PM
smooth. a picture painted for those who watch the waters yet relate to the vivid characterization and imagery
Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit	3-Jan-03/8:51 PM
huh?
Re: Waking Up by PawnedTidal	3-Jan-03/8:50 PM
You can definitely feel what you wrote. It's quite comprehensible to a general audience. Easy for people to relate yet very passionate. keep up the good work
Re: a comment on Just Being Me by jsab78	13-Oct-02/2:42 PM
If ignorance is bliss, you must be in heaven. Instead of looking at other people's work and being crude and judgemental, you should think about your own language. You prefer to use "big words" to make your work more appealing. I don't. I get to the point. I do it sweet and simple for a more simplistic target audience. We don't live in a world of genius' which is obvious from reading your posts. Poem ranker is not a place for you to vent your anger towards other people. If you would like to send constructive criticism, consider what you're reading. Think about who these works are geared towards and that not everyone is like you. You probably do approve of racism. You obviously aren't intelligent enough to put actual corrections or suggestions with regard to any of my work so you babble about subject matter that isn't original. Like being dark and deep is so original. I apologize, I'm only human. I can never be the next Marilyn Manson fan who sits behind my computer wearing black lipstick and writing pointless commentaries on the internet. By the way, "f** me!" I think you should go f** yourself or get a book on modern English compositions. Then let me know what you think. While you're at it, read up on marketing.
Re: a comment on Free to Not Know Me by jsab78	13-Oct-02/2:34 PM
maybe some wrank teenager will read it and like it. maybe some crusty depressed person will read this and have no actual criticism to make on other people's work so he or she will just write bitter angry comments. I'm not offended by criticism, I beg for it,but make it constructive not malicious. Dark Angel? Angel of Death? Maybe you should off yourself!
Re: No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni	8-Oct-02/12:27 AM
smooth. groove. you moved ...me
Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford	7-Oct-02/12:31 PM
To the point. Powerful. Honest. You did it right. Keep up the good work.
Re: Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29	7-Oct-02/12:30 PM
Interesting flow, definitely got the message. rock on man..I hear you