on Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29
7 Oct 2002, 12:30 PM
Interesting flow, definitely got the message. rock on man..I hear you
on Waking Up by PawnedTidal
3 Jan 2003, 8:50 PM
You can definitely feel what you wrote. It's quite comprehensible to a general audience. Easy for people to relate yet very passionate. keep up the good work
on I Think by PawnedTidal
3 Jan 2003, 8:53 PM
been there, know it, feel it...it works quite well. like your style. To the point and honest. Passionate yet simple. Very good.
on Putney at Low Tide by Christof
3 Jan 2003, 8:52 PM
smooth. a picture painted for those who watch the waters yet relate to the vivid characterization and imagery
on No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni
8 Oct 2002, 12:27 AM
smooth. groove. you moved ...me
on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
7 Oct 2002, 12:31 PM
To the point. Powerful. Honest. You did it right. Keep up the good work.
on some deleted poem
5 Oct 2002, 1:19 PM
I value the content, yet it tends to wander a bit back and forth. I feel the vibe you are projecting. It works.
on The Writing Life by poetandknowit
3 Jan 2003, 8:51 PM
huh?
on Lysander cried by bornagainpoet
3 Jan 2003, 8:55 PM
true