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I Think (Free verse) by PawnedTidal
I think that it has finally happened; My dreams have come true. And as hard as I've tried to fight it, I think I love you. I think you could be the one With which I spend the rest of my days. And no matter what my friends tell me, I think this is more than just a phase. I think of how lonely I was, And of all the stars I've dreamt upon. But now that I've met you, I think those days are gone. I think of how you make me feel, Just by being you. It was hard for me to believe, but I think you feel this way, too. I think of what I've done To ever deserve a love like this. Whenever I'm with you, I think an angel has gone amiss. I think that it has finally happened; My dreams have come true. And as hard as I've tried to fight it, I know I love you.

Up the ladder: Dear Ms. Sexton
Down the ladder: Milkshake until beef jerky

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5333333
Weighted score: 5.4697585
Overall Rank: 2851
Posted: September 9, 2002 8:40 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2002 8:40 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.107 | 22-Sep-02/6:47 PM | Reply
Nice. Clean. Too surfacy though, you dipped well with the angel/amiss. Go deeper.
[7] *Lyrisick* @ 63.210.122.224 | 23-Sep-02/4:10 PM | Reply
vERY emotional yet point driven. My kind of writing.
[9] jsab78 @ 205.188.209.107 | 3-Jan-03/8:53 PM | Reply
been there, know it, feel it...it works quite well. like your style. To the point and honest. Passionate yet simple. Very good.
[6] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.230 | 4-Jan-03/10:21 PM | Reply
I'm flattered
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