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I Think (Free verse) by PawnedTidal

I think that it has finally happened; My dreams have come true. And as hard as I've tried to fight it, I think I love you. I think you could be the one With which I spend the rest of my days. And no matter what my friends tell me, I think this is more than just a phase. I think of how lonely I was, And of all the stars I've dreamt upon. But now that I've met you, I think those days are gone. I think of how you make me feel, Just by being you. It was hard for me to believe, but I think you feel this way, too. I think of what I've done To ever deserve a love like this. Whenever I'm with you, I think an angel has gone amiss. I think that it has finally happened; My dreams have come true. And as hard as I've tried to fight it, I know I love you.

*Lyrisick* 23-Sep-02/4:10 PM
vERY emotional yet point driven. My kind of writing.




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