| Re: An Agenda by INTRANSIT |
3-Oct-02/6:22 PM |
I think this is a very powerful piece, I fear people do not realize what this verse means.
Well done, you!!!
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| Re: For my wife by INTRANSIT |
17-Feb-03/9:13 PM |
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Beautiful. Sounds like your "both" in love.
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| Re: Amputee by INTRANSIT |
17-Feb-03/9:22 PM |
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you can really feel your pain in this one.
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| Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
26-Apr-03/2:41 PM |
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I've read alot of your work, but I think this is quite ingenious. Hats off, my friend!
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| Re: What you know by INTRANSIT |
27-Aug-03/10:14 AM |
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you have quite an original writing style. I always enjoy the read. sad and lonely, especially like the last few lines.
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| Re: It's about truckin' by INTRANSIT |
27-Aug-03/10:37 AM |
So many, create and arrange thier poems, it's what they think...not feel. I love that you write your life, your existence.
how YOU portray the world...not how you are expected to. Poetry is not just about guidelines, too often feeling is lost in the pursuit of perfection. I also believe that your job is often overlooked as the noble position that it is. This is your reality, you demand respect....you have mine.
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| Re: The fight by INTRANSIT |
23-Nov-03/7:02 AM |
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Not exactly romantic. Great visual. I like it!!!!
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| Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT |
23-Nov-03/7:09 AM |
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I enjoyed this. Especially the "I felt worse" I like the way you think!!
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| Re: To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT |
28-Jan-04/4:09 PM |
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I concur. Well put, Goed.
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| Re: Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
1-Jun-04/4:44 PM |
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| Re: Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
2-Jun-04/6:44 AM |
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13-Jun-04/4:18 PM |
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Great visual. I really admire your writing style.
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| Re: Bugs by INTRANSIT |
13-Jun-04/4:22 PM |
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You have a way of seeing the beauty in the not-so obvious. Well done. Strike!
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14-Jun-04/6:56 AM |
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Superb! Clearly a very succesful revision.
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| Re: Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT |
26-Apr-05/8:01 PM |
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And yours is better...how? Your brilliant recreation is NOT a Villanelle, so comparing the two proves quite difficult!
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| Re: In praise of racism by INTRANSIT |
23-Jan-06/2:32 PM |
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