on some deleted poem
15 Jun 2003, 7:57 AM
just great, enough said
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 4:13 PM
good enough (8)
on Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus
21 May 2003, 4:11 PM
that's more gay than you
on some deleted poem
15 May 2003, 4:31 PM
no prob
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 6:38 PM
this could be longer but then again I could be wrong (9)
on some deleted poem
17 Jul 2003, 7:27 PM
Nice song, tip to correct spelling before publishing but it's a good way to start writing songs so you should keep writing without listening to some people who put you down. Trust me, being in NY myself where everyone wants a comment about something is tough so you'll do ok. (10)
on Nothing you can say by Rodavlas
13 Jul 2003, 6:10 PM
it's ok for a debut, just work harder
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 12:54 PM
It deserves a rewrite because it isn't as good as some of your others. Nice idea though...
on some deleted poem
30 May 2003, 1:41 PM
the only problem I have with this is the repitition of "you", otherwise it's great (9)
on some deleted poem
15 May 2003, 4:32 PM
It's ok, I can't think of how to edit it so it's good as it is (8)
on I Can't Move On by Sirens_Voice
15 Aug 2004, 4:43 PM
nice...just nice, keep writing
on I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17
7 Aug 2004, 6:59 PM
could be a bit better considering it's a lyric, where in ny are you from anyway? (8)
on The Place I Like Best by tori
24 Oct 2003, 6:57 PM
I know that place, lol (9)
on Blood on the Sidewalk by Red Optimist
28 Jan 2004, 5:47 PM
nice stuff, keep it up
on i think by PhSbLoNdE569
3 Mar 2004, 6:26 PM
nice poem, keep writing cause this is great
on Won't Be Dreaming (co-writer John K) by capachijim
28 Sep 2004, 4:23 PM
how many times did you and John are work on pieces together? (10)
on Story Never Told by Sirens_Voice
13 Oct 2004, 5:35 PM
am I categorized as a brainless twit? (I mean this considering I'm the one who brought you to the site)