regarding some deleted poem...	15-May-03/4:31 PM
no prob
regarding some deleted poem...	15-May-03/4:32 PM
It's ok, I can't think of how to edit it so it's good as it is (8)
Re: Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus	21-May-03/4:11 PM
that's more gay than you
regarding some deleted poem...	21-May-03/4:13 PM
good enough (8)
Re: Tomorrow by Katie	27-May-03/12:58 PM
this is perfect. That's all I have to say
regarding some deleted poem...	30-May-03/1:41 PM
the only problem I have with this is the repitition of "you", otherwise it's great (9)
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jun-03/6:38 PM
this could be longer but then again I could be wrong (9)
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-03/7:57 AM
just great, enough said
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/12:54 PM
It deserves a rewrite because it isn't as good as some of your others. Nice idea though...
Re: Nothing you can say by Rodavlas	13-Jul-03/6:10 PM
it's ok for a debut, just work harder
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Jul-03/7:27 PM
Nice song, tip to correct spelling before publishing but it's a good way to start writing songs so you should keep writing without listening to some people who put you down. Trust me, being in NY myself where everyone wants a comment about something is tough so you'll do ok. (10)
Re: Tears by tori	24-Oct-03/6:55 PM
nice job for a first publish (8)
Re: Shadows by tori	24-Oct-03/6:57 PM
This is probably the best of what you wrote so far (10)
Re: The Place I Like Best by tori	24-Oct-03/6:57 PM
I know that place, lol (9)
Re: Blood on the Sidewalk by Red Optimist	28-Jan-04/5:47 PM
nice stuff, keep it up
Re: i think by PhSbLoNdE569	3-Mar-04/6:26 PM
nice poem, keep writing cause this is great
Re: I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17	7-Aug-04/6:59 PM
could be a bit better considering it's a lyric, where in ny are you from anyway? (8)
Re: I Can't Move On by Sirens_Voice	15-Aug-04/4:43 PM
nice...just nice, keep writing
Re: Won't Be Dreaming (co-writer John K) by capachijim	28-Sep-04/4:23 PM
how many times did you and John are work on pieces together? (10)
Re: Story Never Told by Sirens_Voice	13-Oct-04/5:35 PM
am I categorized as a brainless twit? (I mean this considering I'm the one who brought you to the site)