regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Oct-02/8:29 AM |
THis is a great lyric, it shows about the true imagineation of a lyricist
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2-Oct-02/8:32 AM |
you just need a better ryhme scehme but overall one of your better ones
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Re: Midnight Dream by Katie |
12-Oct-02/10:54 AM |
this is just sooo funny. It's like it actually happened (hoping it didn't) lol, but great work
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27-Oct-02/2:44 PM |
this reminds me of something in my life so sad, oh yeah my life
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Re: Roll the dice (revised) by Katie |
15-Dec-02/5:40 PM |
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26-Apr-03/7:35 PM |
nice one, this really sounds like a real garage band or maybe more, keep writing cause u might have something
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2-May-03/6:47 PM |
It's ok, but I do want you to use more than just roller coaster over and over again, other than that, it's ok
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8-May-03/6:05 PM |
What happened to my remix????? oh well, I'll post it myself
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9-May-03/5:35 PM |
I feel you could extend this song a little because each verse is a little too long, but overall, it's a good song (9)
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12-May-03/10:34 AM |
Find better rhymes, stop using "I", make it a little longer because there is no chorus I don't know what else cause the song sounds like you have experience being a reject (just playing)
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12-May-03/5:37 PM |
Nice, I can find a nice tune for this, probably one of your best.
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