Re: Cat by Topaz Servias	7-Jan-03/6:05 PM
go over this with a fine tooth comb. Quite funny. no vote till tweaked.
Re: Backwards baby blend by Blade	7-Jan-03/5:52 PM
Contrasting hard/soft and cold/warm. Interesting mix indeed.
Re: a comment on 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT	7-Jan-03/3:27 PM
Not what I was going for but thanks for the observation! Always useful to hear what others (see).
Re: Home by Owner of the Sky	7-Jan-03/2:54 PM
I concur. This is good raw. Bake it better.
Re: Into the Deep by Owner of the Sky	7-Jan-03/2:51 PM
apologiZe. change salt to gravel, I think. vellynize. aint seen you in a coons age. howaya,K?
Re: a comment on Midnight in the Garden by Cha no Onna	7-Jan-03/2:42 PM
Duh! My bad. PK is right, I'm not very observant. pleh. wunnerful name though, on both accounts.
Re: a comment on 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT	7-Jan-03/2:40 PM
Yes, but that would be a little slow. by,oh,say,200.
Re: Frustration by DewDrop	7-Jan-03/9:41 AM
dona matter what eet ees. eees goot.
Re: Midnight in the Garden by Cha no Onna	7-Jan-03/9:39 AM
I cant find the changes.Still like it.
Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan	7-Jan-03/7:08 AM
Yes, well done.
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	7-Jan-03/6:37 AM
I'll see your shark and raise you a......
Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>	6-Jan-03/3:41 PM
Um, did I piss you off? This is better,though.
Re: My sad life by Bobjim the II	6-Jan-03/3:36 PM
Definitely funny!!
Re: A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop	6-Jan-03/8:50 AM
Interestin twist.
Re: Jewel by cleverdevice	6-Jan-03/8:45 AM
How did it impact the floor? harshly? L-13, merge it with L-14. It's great when something so small can have an impact so big.
Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>	6-Jan-03/8:38 AM
I see you've already tweaked the first stanza. still looming twice. I'm holding the vote.
Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>	6-Jan-03/6:44 AM
let me slurk some coffee and we'll get down to business. Definitely smoother.
Re: NEEDING TO REFORM by suzanna	5-Jan-03/7:50 AM
Best of dthe three.
Re: Someone please say no. by suzanna	5-Jan-03/7:48 AM
What is normal? Great Idea, too plain. add color.
Re: A Stressful Moment by suzanna	5-Jan-03/7:46 AM
No you will have only begun.