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24-Nov-02/11:12 AM |
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ONE DIMEBAG AND A CHEESE CROISSANDWICH PLEASE
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| Re: Ever Felt by nightii |
24-Nov-02/11:39 AM |
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| Re: the devil in you by ciantu |
24-Nov-02/8:50 PM |
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GOOD WORK KEEP WORKING WORKER
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| Re: The North Wind by Ranger |
25-Nov-02/6:49 AM |
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| Re: Spider by Blade |
5-Dec-02/2:26 PM |
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VERSE: NICOTENE VALIUM VICODEN MARAJUANA ECSTACY AND ALCOHOL. CHORUS: C-C-C-C-C-COCAINE.
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| Re: A BACHUS MAN A MANY by Garrett S Sexton |
8-Dec-02/8:17 PM |
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| Re: Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum |
8-Dec-02/9:01 PM |
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tofu and chew. good work. SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO
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| Re: Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8 |
9-Dec-02/4:58 PM |
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1, these are haiku plural 2, i wrote a poem about you and i'd be honored if you read it which is to say i won't stop bothering you until you do because i love you and i want to have tons of babies with you and nobody but you and live with you etcetcetcwergfcerfderdfefd the damn thing scratched me as i was installinig a cat door
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16-Dec-02/8:08 AM |
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Unoriginal. Try making fun of Doylum's rotting pussy.
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| Re: Saviour by Mutant_X |
16-Dec-02/9:30 AM |
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DUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUHHHNHA NA???
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| Re: Hunt by cobalt |
16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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16-Dec-02/9:32 AM |
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| Re: Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum |
16-Dec-02/11:15 AM |
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| Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8 |
18-Dec-02/2:55 PM |
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Guys you make me sad when you fight so.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
21-Dec-02/8:50 AM |
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I like your new persona, -=Dark_Angel=-. Although before covering this NASA material you really should have taken another gander at my NASA pedofeelia poem.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Dec-02/8:02 PM |
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Wow you sure seem preoccupied with me and my body. 7 for flattery, or in your case fattery.i
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| Re: Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 |
23-Dec-02/5:34 PM |
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This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.
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| Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/9:23 PM |
"I'm speechless. I'm sorry, and I have no wish whatsoever to spark a
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
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