on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
18 Dec 2002, 2:55 PM
Guys you make me sad when you fight so.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 8:08 AM
Unoriginal. Try making fun of Doylum's rotting pussy.
on My Friend? by Blade
16 Dec 2002, 9:31 AM
good oneN
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 9:23 PM
"I'm speechless. I'm sorry, and I have no wish whatsoever to spark a
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8
23 Dec 2002, 5:34 PM
This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 8:02 PM
Wow you sure seem preoccupied with me and my body. 7 for flattery, or in your case fattery.i
on My Friend? by Blade
16 Dec 2002, 9:31 AM
good oneN
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 9:32 AM
igy ppn
on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum
16 Dec 2002, 11:15 AM
meow. 0.
on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
9 Dec 2002, 4:58 PM
1, these are haiku plural 2, i wrote a poem about you and i'd be honored if you read it which is to say i won't stop bothering you until you do because i love you and i want to have tons of babies with you and nobody but you and live with you etcetcetcwergfcerfderdfefd the damn thing scratched me as i was installinig a cat door
on A BACHUS MAN A MANY by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 8:17 PM
This is quite good.
on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum
8 Dec 2002, 9:01 PM
tofu and chew. good work. SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO
on The North Wind by Ranger
25 Nov 2002, 6:49 AM
BLADE'S STUPID
on the devil in you by ciantu
24 Nov 2002, 8:50 PM
GOOD WORK KEEP WORKING WORKER
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 11:12 AM
ONE DIMEBAG AND A CHEESE CROISSANDWICH PLEASE
on some deleted poem
21 Dec 2002, 8:50 AM
I like your new persona, -=Dark_Angel=-. Although before covering this NASA material you really should have taken another gander at my NASA pedofeelia poem.