on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 9:45 PM
my velouria, my vel-our-ia
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 9:44 PM
proofread
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2002, 8:34 PM
YOU SHOULD HAVE USED MY TECHNIQUE OF RHYMING WORDS WITH THEMSELVES. CHEAP ANNOYING RHYMES. REPEATING WORDS.
on The Autopsy (as shown on Channel Four) by Nicholas Jones
23 Nov 2002, 8:31 PM
OH GREAT NOW I HAVE ANOTHER ERECTION.
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2002, 8:28 PM
THOSE PEOPLE WILL EAT *ANYTHING*
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2002, 8:32 PM
I ACTUALLY HAD THIS IDEA - POSTING A WAD OF COMMENTS. I THINK I'LL DO MY OWN. THAT'D FUCKING ROCK.
on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness
23 Nov 2002, 11:28 PM
why not...write a poem about it?
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 Nov 2002, 11:31 PM
OH GOD MONKEY ISLAND POETRY
on Absence by newdawnfades
19 Nov 2002, 10:34 PM
IF IT WORKS KEEP IT IF NOT CHANGE IT. THERE ARE NO HARD AND FAST RULES TO ANYTHING WORTHWHILE. FURTHERMORE, JOY DIVISION FUCKING ROCKS THE FUCKING WORLD.
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 10:39 PM
ICOULDESCAPETHISFEELING,WITHMYCHINAGIRL, WAKEUPMORNINGSWHERESMYLITTLECHINAGIRLIFEE LWRETCHEDLIKEITWASMARLONBRANDOWHENILOOKAT MYCHINAGIRLVISIONSOFSWASTIKASINMYHEADANDF ANSFOREVERYONEITSINTHEWAAAAAAAYOFMYEYES(W HITEOFMYEYES)YOUSHOULDN'TMESSWITHME,I'LLR UINEVERYTHINGYOUAREYOUKNOWI'LLGIVEYOUTELE VISION,I'LLGIVEYOUEYESOFBLUE,I'LLGIVEYOUM ENWHOWANTTORULETHEWORLDGAHHHHHGAY
on untitled#3 by darby pyn
19 Nov 2002, 10:02 PM
INSERT WORDS YOU LEFT OUT. SERIOUSLY, IN THIS CASE EVERY FORMALISM IS YOUR GREATEST ALLY.
on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED
19 Nov 2002, 9:50 PM
GUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
on Wearing Black, as Memory Dictates by UnityMitford
19 Nov 2002, 1:58 PM
THERE'S THIS BEAUTIFUL PHOTOGRAPH OF HIM LEANING OVER TO SHAKE THE HAND OF A LITTLE BOY IN A CLASSROOM. THE HUMANITY AND LOVE IS UNDENIABLE. YOU DON'T SEE THAT PHOTOGRAPH VERY OFTEN.
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 2:03 PM
I NEVER GAVE YOU /ROOT TO MY BALLS. EVER.
on Time to Kill by Shin-Bojangles
19 Nov 2002, 5:16 AM
PLEASE EXCUSE HIM - HE'S WELSH.
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 9:44 PM
will trampolines
on It started with a kiss by little_angel_maria
19 Nov 2002, 9:46 PM
This exactly what I can't stand about girls. You reek of death and weakness. Some of you, some of the time.
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 9:59 PM
APCRAY BIT INCERESAY
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2002, 10:27 PM
oh god spinning hurf ugh blroorroggghgh duh
on confused by little_angel_maria
19 Nov 2002, 10:01 PM
ASSUMING THIS IS A JOKE. SORRY I MUST. WHY NOT DO A POEM ABOUT A MESSED UP ANGEL OR SOMETHING OTHER THAN SOME FAG CALLED 'LOGAN'