on Loneliness by Cha no Onna
11 May 2002, 10:38 PM
Look at me, I'm a vampyre: FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP
on Pixie Wings And Rose Petals by onlyontuesdays
11 May 2002, 10:05 PM
I'm calling your bluff on this one, cheeky devil.
on Eyes, Crying. by LucidRevelation
13 May 2002, 8:42 PM
I like cakes, pie, anything related to the hostess line really.
on Smiling by Jill Stockinger
13 May 2002, 5:14 PM
obsidian knives are really more seperate flat chunks of obsidan blade tied together on a stick. They were more like reusable razors than knives, since although they were sharper than surgical steel when first made, they became dull fast. One wouldn't make a long curved obsidian blade.
Other than THAT, it was okay.
Other than THAT, it was okay.
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
12 May 2002, 9:00 AM
Look out Rilke!!!!!! TEN
on Every Day in Every Way by nentwined
12 May 2002, 9:03 AM
prismatic
adj 1: of or relating to or resembling or constituting a prism; "prismatic form" 2: exhibiting spectral colors formed by refraction of light through a prism; "prismatic light"
adj 1: of or relating to or resembling or constituting a prism; "prismatic form" 2: exhibiting spectral colors formed by refraction of light through a prism; "prismatic light"
on some deleted poem
12 May 2002, 9:08 AM
It's all about you isn't it.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 May 2002, 9:13 AM
I WANT TO SEE MORE WORK LIKE THIS
on Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined
11 May 2002, 10:10 PM
I'm sitting, but I will judge, and, in so doing, I will make you a blue trashbin.
on some deleted poem
11 May 2002, 10:15 PM
This poem registers too high on the I'm so clevermeter, which is OK, but the simple fact of the matter is, there is nothing less funny than a humerous poem that respects any single convention of poetry, the tastes and dewdrop covered worldview of poetry readers, or even standards of continuity. HATE US.
on some deleted poem
11 May 2002, 10:20 PM
this is a poem about not being led by a tit?
and why is the moon beam the one taking action? Isn't that image more about the paper catching your eye?
This hardly makes the cyberdifference agreed upon in our implicit agreement.
and why is the moon beam the one taking action? Isn't that image more about the paper catching your eye?
This hardly makes the cyberdifference agreed upon in our implicit agreement.
on The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 May 2002, 10:30 PM
Most of your poems aren't very funny. This one is.
remember HATE THE AUDIENCE. We laugh when you're angry and we're angry when you laugh.
remember HATE THE AUDIENCE. We laugh when you're angry and we're angry when you laugh.
on some deleted poem
11 May 2002, 10:35 PM
yeah you cross them wires and hope for the best.
do you really think that this sentiment or methodology is anything but tiring? How would you feel if you read to the end only to realize that the poem had no ambition to begin with? I'll bet not too good.
do you really think that this sentiment or methodology is anything but tiring? How would you feel if you read to the end only to realize that the poem had no ambition to begin with? I'll bet not too good.
on some deleted poem
11 May 2002, 10:42 PM
Okay, THIS one gets a ten IF ONLY for the first two lines. Now, this was awesome. Suggestions: make the last line and the title more flowery. If I had written this I'd have put the s in hands in parenthesis, but that's just my technique.
on "The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" by david
11 May 2002, 10:48 PM
I'm not a catholic, but I'm pretty sure "Buick" isn't slang for penis.
on Laughter by crims0ngh0st
12 May 2002, 9:06 AM
Who let Oprah in
Ms.(?) Malakin: Is this sarcasm?