| Re: Pixie Wings And Rose Petals by onlyontuesdays |
11-May-02/10:05 PM |
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I'm calling your bluff on this one, cheeky devil.
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| Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined |
11-May-02/10:10 PM |
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I'm sitting, but I will judge, and, in so doing, I will make you a blue trashbin.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-May-02/10:15 PM |
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This poem registers too high on the I'm so clevermeter, which is OK, but the simple fact of the matter is, there is nothing less funny than a humerous poem that respects any single convention of poetry, the tastes and dewdrop covered worldview of poetry readers, or even standards of continuity. HATE US.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-May-02/10:20 PM |
this is a poem about not being led by a tit?
and why is the moon beam the one taking action? Isn't that image more about the paper catching your eye?
This hardly makes the cyberdifference agreed upon in our implicit agreement.
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| Re: The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-May-02/10:30 PM |
Most of your poems aren't very funny. This one is.
remember HATE THE AUDIENCE. We laugh when you're angry and we're angry when you laugh.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-May-02/10:35 PM |
yeah you cross them wires and hope for the best.
do you really think that this sentiment or methodology is anything but tiring? How would you feel if you read to the end only to realize that the poem had no ambition to begin with? I'll bet not too good.
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| Re: Loneliness by Cha no Onna |
11-May-02/10:38 PM |
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Look at me, I'm a vampyre: FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-May-02/10:42 PM |
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Okay, THIS one gets a ten IF ONLY for the first two lines. Now, this was awesome. Suggestions: make the last line and the title more flowery. If I had written this I'd have put the s in hands in parenthesis, but that's just my technique.
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| Re: "The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" by david |
11-May-02/10:48 PM |
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I'm not a catholic, but I'm pretty sure "Buick" isn't slang for penis.
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| Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman |
12-May-02/9:00 AM |
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| Re: Cashmere by Tekara |
12-May-02/9:02 AM |
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Can you lend me your Dead Can Dance CD / Give me a ride to Starbucks?
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| Re: Every Day in Every Way by nentwined |
12-May-02/9:03 AM |
prismatic
adj 1: of or relating to or resembling or constituting a prism; "prismatic form" 2: exhibiting spectral colors formed by refraction of light through a prism; "prismatic light"
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| Re: Laughter by crims0ngh0st |
12-May-02/9:06 AM |
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12-May-02/9:08 AM |
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It's all about you isn't it.
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-May-02/9:13 AM |
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I WANT TO SEE MORE WORK LIKE THIS
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| Re: The Plum by ruella |
13-May-02/4:41 PM |
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| Re: Driftwood by malakin |
13-May-02/5:11 PM |
Mr. Angel was that sarcasm?
Ms.(?) Malakin: Is this sarcasm?
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| Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger |
13-May-02/5:14 PM |
obsidian knives are really more seperate flat chunks of obsidan blade tied together on a stick. They were more like reusable razors than knives, since although they were sharper than surgical steel when first made, they became dull fast. One wouldn't make a long curved obsidian blade.
Other than THAT, it was okay.
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| Re: Zen by gothwalk |
13-May-02/5:57 PM |
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| Re: Eyes, Crying. by LucidRevelation |
13-May-02/8:42 PM |
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I like cakes, pie, anything related to the hostess line really.
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