Re: Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun	29-Jul-02/9:52 PM
As a former Steat Urchin and Art Student I am in a position to tell you that never have Neitzsche, Bacardi, placard and "hot summer waltzes" ever been combined in any medium. I am giving you a ten because the "rape teacher" poem really gives me perspective on this one.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jul-02/9:54 PM
I like it, and I am STALKING YOU
Re: The End by venusdemilo	29-Jul-02/9:54 PM
TWO WORDS: SUICIDE PACT
Re: Crimson Diaries by Jsylum	29-Jul-02/9:55 PM
precious, not too pretty...hmm...hard decision..pretty good....quite a cut above...yet it doesn't do much for me. Perhaps I should write a poem about how I feel.
Re: Assassin's Song by Tekara	29-Jul-02/9:56 PM
You have obviously never killed anyone.
Re: wednesday night after church by unknown	29-Jul-02/9:57 PM
and little boys, am I right?
Re: A prayer for the afterthought by Eric Johnson	29-Jul-02/9:58 PM
10 for sincerity and craft, -1 because it isn't terribly novel, overall quite good. Genuine sentiment of this sort is very rare here.
Re: domination by midnight	29-Jul-02/10:01 PM
WHAT ISN'T MANLY ABOUT PINK
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jul-02/7:49 PM
Cheeky devil.
Re: Crying Beside a Lake by x311	30-Jul-02/7:50 PM
While I'm sure you found this cathartic, those of us considerate enough to read the damned thing are stupider for having done so and I hardly think that's fair.
Re: fashion sense by crin	30-Jul-02/8:01 PM
This could have been better stated in pa-riz-oze. 7 for effort.
Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum	30-Jul-02/8:02 PM
Replace Sean with Bjorn, read it aloud...etc..spellcheck...good concept though.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jul-02/8:05 PM
The world's natural resources will be gone within your lifetime. There will be wars over water supplies and food. Slaughter and poverty will triumph on a scale we've never seen before. The world is overpopulated by 4 billion. What do you think is going to happen to those 4 billion? Hope my ass. Naive: 4
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jul-02/8:06 PM
Perception of WHAT? This isn't even a METAPOEM. Clever though.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jul-02/8:06 PM
This one is great. I love the lengthy last line.
Re: CoffeeNoBody by webguy	30-Jul-02/8:07 PM
I agree.
Re: Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey	30-Jul-02/8:08 PM
Yeah. And there's absolutely nothing sexy about douching either (aside from the uncontrollable sobbing). Decent poem.
Re: Waiting for my Beautiful Woman by Win	30-Jul-02/8:09 PM
The line spacing is interesting but the poem doesn't say a whole lot.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Jul-02/8:13 PM
huuuhhh...cleverish...I'm feeling a little vaklemt...okay poem...a little fairytale-ish...good work I guess.
Re: Concrete by beakism	30-Jul-02/8:20 PM
excellent work. But tell me: do you have any idea what a cubic yard of concrete weighs? Quite a bit. If there is ANY stage of construction that shouldn't be messed around with it is the one you describe. There is a firm in LA which specializes in cleaning up concrete spills, which happen when the molds and casts are incorrectly constructed. An accident resulting in several hundred tons of concrete to spill out of a mold can easily cost millions of dollars in repair, cleanup and damages. And women don't have a mind for that sort of thing anyway. Good work.