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The End (Free verse) by venusdemilo
Is the end ever defined? Will I find a sign or steep cliff? Will a voice say to me "There is no more" How will I know its the end Of you and me? Can we take a different route? Can we refuse to go? Continuing in Circles Living forever as best friends Or... Will we take a short cut Dowse a healthy growing Flame. How will I ever know What to do to prevent this. To prevent the end.

Up the ladder: Praise
Down the ladder: Why am I here?

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1666665
Overall Rank: 5063
Posted: July 11, 2002 10:05 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 10:05 AM PDT
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[8] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.88.121 | 29-Jul-02/9:54 PM | Reply
TWO WORDS: SUICIDE PACT
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