| Re: Complete.Death.Destiny. by LucidRevelation |
21-Jul-02/2:55 PM |
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21-Jul-02/2:57 PM |
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They smell like kimchee and always say yobosayoh and they all drink whisky and trick out their honda civics.
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| Re: Complete.Death.Destiny. by LucidRevelation |
21-Jul-02/8:52 PM |
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aside from the uncontrollable sobbing, there is nothing sexy about douching.
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| Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin |
22-Jul-02/8:59 PM |
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| Re: Fruition by Modulo |
28-Jul-02/6:11 PM |
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John Jacob Jinglehiemer Schmidt
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| Re: Fruition by Modulo |
28-Jul-02/6:11 PM |
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John Jacob Jinglehiemer Schmidt
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28-Jul-02/6:16 PM |
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| Re: Mellow by frostygirl |
28-Jul-02/6:17 PM |
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| Re: The Pain by silver |
28-Jul-02/6:21 PM |
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| Re: Hands by frostygirl |
28-Jul-02/6:22 PM |
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Look honey if it weren't for the gun and the spear we'd all be eating berries and morels right now
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| Re: will you? by Sapphire |
28-Jul-02/6:26 PM |
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Sorry, not enough...time?
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| Re: The Rocky-Horus picture show by horus8 |
29-Jul-02/8:54 PM |
YOU ARE A WANKER. PLEASE DELETE THIS POEM.
Why not just be satisfied with normal poetry like everybody else? Why strive for more?? AFTER ALL YOUR FATHER AND I HAVE DONE FOR YOU.
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| Re: untitled #2 by venusdemilo |
29-Jul-02/8:55 PM |
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I think M.J. already covered this material
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| Re: River of life by Roisin |
29-Jul-02/8:58 PM |
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| Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage |
29-Jul-02/9:15 PM |
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A LIGHTNING STORM?? DA are you MARTIN LUTHER or SOMETHING?? Now RAVEN, I would like to make it very clear that I DO NOT WANT YOUR "PUNANI". Don't worry about that. Nobody wants it, even if you gave it away. Now I personally think this poem is mediocre. It is certainly not deserving of 10s, but that's opinion. I was reading some Dylan Thomas last night, and I'd be a damn fool not to tell you to do the same. The major fault of this poem and all of its ilk is that it is meaningless by virtue of its medium. TCP/IP has a tendency to destroy any significance to the words you're saying. TCP/IP, even in the ARPANET days made it painfully clear how much utter bullshit floats above us like those plant islands on venus in that episode of cowboy bebop. So in short, I suggest you TOSS OUT THE DEAD CAN DANCE CDs, START LISTENING TO JOY DIVISION AND GET SOME LIKEMINDED PEOPLE TOGETHER WITH SOME WHISKEY AND WRITE ABOUT THAT. Remember, WRITE what you KNOW, but do not SUBMIT IT if it IS UTTERLY LACKING IN CRAFT OR NOVELTY or ANYTHING ELSE WHICH I'D CARE TO READ. If you need some help I'm sure DA would be happy to critique your work before you hit submit.
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| Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage |
29-Jul-02/9:26 PM |
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P.S.: DarkAngel hates you./ DarkAngel hates you./ DarkAngel hates you because he loves you. Furthermore, DA AND RAVEN SITTIN' IN A TREE, KAY EYE ESS ESS EYE EN GEE. FIRST COMES LOVE, THEN COMES MARRAIGE, THEN COMES A DEMENTED BABY WITH BAD TEETH AND BAD LUCK WITH THE OPPOSITE GENDER, NOT TO MENTION A PROPENSITY FOR THE ARGUING ARTS IN THE BABY CARRAIGE.
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| Re: Economics 499 by ErgoErgun |
29-Jul-02/9:30 PM |
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Not very poetic, but quite good all the same.
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29-Jul-02/9:31 PM |
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| Re: untitled #3 by venusdemilo |
29-Jul-02/9:39 PM |
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29-Jul-02/9:48 PM |
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You know, Horus Eight, the poem "Halp!!" was inspired by a real life story: YOURS!! And by that I mean I thought the concept of military prison was hilarious enough to inspire poetry. Check out my most recent poem: "Dear Girl". It is a Work of A.
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