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Complete.Death.Destiny. (Other) by LucidRevelation
Slit the throat of your terror. Remove your yellow belly. Let the blood that is your life slide down and trickle in to all of the crevices filling in the absence of your breath. Now you are c o m p l e t e and worldly. You stain the path that leads to your own d e a t h. You have marked your d e s t i n y

Up the ladder: Cliche
Down the ladder: Backwards baby blend

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.571429
Weighted score: 4.6866894
Overall Rank: 12075
Posted: May 11, 2002 11:27 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 11:27 AM PDT
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[n/a] deleted user @ 206.180.235.33 | 26-Jun-02/1:56 AM | Reply
Obtuse.
[4] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.107.96 | 21-Jul-02/2:55 PM | Reply
How much do you weigh?
[n/a] LucidRevelation @ | 21-Jul-02/3:31 PM | Reply
Um, why?
[4] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.68.217 | 21-Jul-02/8:52 PM | Reply
aside from the uncontrollable sobbing, there is nothing sexy about douching.
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