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Crying Beside a Lake (Free verse) by x311 Always and never
Are the times it felt right
For so long my heart has known
But never could it push my mind into action
I had so many chances
To do what I had longed for
I had love for you
While I loathed myself
Because time had come calling
To take what belonged to him
Opportunities
He stole from me
While you were near me
I couldn't tell you
And now I finally long to
As you drift away from me
I imagine us side by side
As I ponder the thought
Reality shows me the truth
Of someone else with you
I've missed my chance
But now I will have you
Always never
Up the ladder:
The Beggar
Down the ladder:
Are you spreading it?
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Posted: July 30, 2002 3:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 3:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.2379994 Overall Rank: 13185 Comments:
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30-Jul-02/7:50 PM
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While I'm sure you found this cathartic, those of us considerate enough to read the damned thing are stupider for having done so and I hardly think that's fair.
but there has to be a place for prunes doesn't there?
that will be 'in the ice cream', trussed up nicely with some steamy-hot chocolate sauce. oh dear, who's being greedy now? i like my petits vanilla, thank you very much. although cheese and port never seems to fail, either.
now here you were, crying about your bruised plums, and i offer the parable of the laid-by plum, sage with age, and you start whining about vessels? more wine! sommelier, another bottle of your finest!
right its settled then, just one more mint waffer for the lady. g-mornin and see you later, sorry H8 i cant see the to hounds at the moment its time for beddy byes
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