on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap
8 Apr 2007, 8:56 AM
Hmm, I really like your title.
on Sometimes by pinay_miss_azn
8 Apr 2007, 8:58 AM
Boo hoo. This is a pimple poem. If you read your poetry to others, no wonder you have no friends.
on Provacation by J.B. Manning
15 Mar 2007, 10:24 AM
Rambling and grating at the same time. Congratulations.
on some deleted poem
6 May 2007, 10:17 AM
Very clever. I quite like it.
on Chemistry by <Wankster>
25 Apr 2007, 5:58 PM
Bleugh. No wonder girls don't like you all that much.
on I Wonder If by ToMuchPain04
26 Apr 2007, 4:19 PM
This is horrible and pimply. You've broken the sympathetic contract in the second line and you resort to tired cliches.
on Mixed Feelings by PunkyPanda
26 Apr 2007, 4:22 PM
spelling mistakes and cliches totally ruin an already mediocre piece.
on My Pain 2004 by ToMuchPain04
26 Apr 2007, 4:23 PM
cliched rhymes and uncapitalized i's make this seem puerile and just... bad.
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2007, 4:26 PM
You're obsessed with your wife's breasts, aren't you? I like the first four lines.
on Voices Within by DJCopasetic
26 Apr 2007, 4:28 PM
cliches and easy rhymes - bad news for any poem, I'm afraid.
on Death by Highschool_Poem_Girl
26 Apr 2007, 4:29 PM
Well, your poetry would make anybody feel like that.
on Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu
26 Apr 2007, 4:31 PM
This is very funny and creative.
on A Pen Named Ed by Enkidu
26 Apr 2007, 6:53 PM
tee, it's cute.
on The Way by Highschool_Poem_Girl
26 Apr 2007, 6:57 PM
whoa, way too long.
on Neil Simon is Living in My Lunula by MacFrantic
22 Jul 2007, 9:10 AM
I like the last stanza; the rest is a bit weak
on Reality by Sirens_Voice
22 Jul 2007, 9:15 AM
Wow, shut up already. This drags on and on and on, with no point...
on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom
22 Jul 2007, 9:30 AM
Very funny and cute. I like.