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I Wonder If (Free verse) by ToMuchPain04
I Wonder If Death is better than this shitty ass life. Life seems to cut deep like a long cold knife. I wish Had it in me to understand How some things Just seem to control a man Wake up every morning and play your part At end of the day your drag down by a heavy heart You hope the script master has a different plan If not this may be your very last dance Sometimes we look for another way A way that can make us go astray wether through drugs or a drunken binge I hope you Can Forgive me God cause I know its a sin If i awake the next morning not in my bed I pray to God Im in heaven to rest my head I hope never have to feel this way again Im really scared to know how my life is going to end Though i shouldnt be scared cause i know where I been Would you want to start your life all over again?

Up the ladder: I don't wanna be me

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12004
Posted: April 9, 2004 7:39 PM PDT; Last modified: April 9, 2004 7:39 PM PDT
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[0] cheese.doodles @ 76.64.14.95 | 26-Apr-07/4:19 PM | Reply
This is horrible and pimply. You've broken the sympathetic contract in the second line and you resort to tired cliches.
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